Daydreams remembering summer
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on a sizzling august afternoon
the glitter on the water scintillates
tapdancing on a hot griddle
till a cool breeze reaches the shore
and loosely sways the braids
of an old weeping willow
as if to a sweet nostalgic rhythm
AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Submitted on June 11, 2025 for contest YOUR CHOICE X sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2025
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