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on a sizzling august afternoon the glitter on the water scintillates tapdancing on a hot griddle till a cool breeze reaches the shore and loosely sways the braids of an old weeping willow as if to a sweet nostalgic rhythm AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on June 11, 2025 for contest YOUR CHOICE X sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 6/12/2025 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Line! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2025 7:24:00 AM
Much appreciated ~ thanks
Date: 6/12/2025 9:01:00 AM
The vivid imagery in each line is so captivating. You captured an unforgettable moment with just few powerful words! This is a FAVE! Congratulations and stay creative!^___^JCB
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2025 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much ~ most appreciated
Date: 6/5/2025 9:16:00 PM
This is very beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2025 7:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Karen ~

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