Daybreak Up High

The flight had been long
as the jet soared through night.
My neighbors were lifelessly still,
weary for sleep, the night would fulfill,
and morning would graciously greet.

High up in space, I silently watch
as the sky passes from the deep.
Moving at its pace, much lighter still,
the sun, birthing change at will.
I must await, new dawning is nigh.

Daybreak speaks in a soft faint glow,
appearing shyly on the far horizon.
But in a blink of the eye,
God painted the sky,
with tones found in welcomed aurora.

Sweet blush of spring, orchids in bloom,
purple mystery in dawn’s warm glow,
rainbow tints on a panoramic screen
vividly show this God-given scene,
molded in joy and heavenly peace.

I placed my hand on the window pane,
watching white billowy clouds afloat.
God gave us his all and gave us his best.
On this soft tenderness, I could rest
if my hand could but touch.

Far above where angelic clouds surround,
the plane adrift or afloat,
clinging both far beyond and below
in this ocean of fresh fallen snow,
welcoming us into the light.

Such a spectacular sight to behold!
Sun-lit clouds dressed in white,
the scene so enameled with grace,
seemed to foretell that heavenly place,
where he awaits with pallette in hand.

I stayed three weeks and traveled far,
saw beautiful views and noted places,
but none can compare to that morning’s
glory in dawning.
Thank you God for all creation!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:52 AM
HI, there, I am reviewing fav poems of mine this morning, and saw this again. also wondering, where have you gone?? I hope you are ok. LUv, Andrea
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July 26, 2010 at 10:44 PM
TRUE , WE ARE GRATEFUL TO GOD FOR HIS BEAUTIFUL CREATION , AND IF I AM RIGHT , OUR IS THE ONLY ONE IN THIS COSMOS ! YOU HAVE EXPRESSED THIS 'DAYBREAK' FROM YOUR HEART ! Thank you for reading my poems dear Carolyn ! Best wishes , - Raj
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July 4, 2010 at 5:31 PM
I am late in finding this treasure....but so glad I did. This is pure loveliness, and I felt I was sitting there seeing it through your eyes....this gift of beauty. Thank you for the lovely view. ~ Carrie
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July 3, 2010 at 4:25 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. way to go my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation.. AlohA..
Beer Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Carolyn you truly repainted God's beautiful picture. Thank you. His brush is busy day and night and never disappoints me. Good one. God Bless, Cile
Neels Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 3:20 AM
Spectacular piece, congrats on being featured as well - rgds Wilma
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Love, Carol
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June 28, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Awesome write, Carolyn, fabulous imagery and you are right nothing can compare with such a glorious gift from God. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Carolline.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to share with us ...with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii
Fisher Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 8:56 PM
This was beathtakingly beautiful my dear. A fav for you!!! Luv, Andrea
Buckling Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Beautifully crafted. I felt as though each stanza gently handed me to the next with yet another wonderful thing to share. Really enjoyed reading. Thank you for reading and your comment.
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 11:45 AM
I wonder how many other passengers saw and did not see. It took your artistic eye to absorb and poetically preserve it. Congratulations. Joyce
M Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Ah ha! I caught you on the winner's list again! A good ratio with only 4 poems on your list! WAY TO GO!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your winning poem in Gareth's contest.. a beautiful write and honor for u to so enjoy as u walk to the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 9, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Delightful write to your faith Carolyn >> James
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April 8, 2010 at 2:37 PM
You are a real good poet. It is a pleasure to read your words. It is like you been sitting down just waitting to let us know this . Have a good one.
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April 7, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Enjoyed thank you.
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April 4, 2010 at 4:56 PM
I am no professional, I am still learning also. If I can help let me know.
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April 4, 2010 at 4:23 PM
welcome to poetry soup, enjoyed reading your poems today.
Henderson Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Hi Carolyn - So beautiful and descriptive. What a wonderful word picture. Thank God for each dawning! Thanks for the kind words on my poem, Sunrise...Terry
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Carolyn. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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