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Daybreak

Sunrise beach walkin'
no need for talkin'
when elements transcend all language.

My hand in your hand hold
seashells unswept by calm
receding tide
still swelling.

Burnt umbers stroke aqua
marines break through gull
wing thunder haloed
in hallowness.

No space for shallowness
much less for callowness
hope for tomorrow struts sure gently
proffered, dawn's break of night.

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Turns me on!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/7/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 5:56:00 PM
Cpngrats Nancy on a superb win for this excellent entry my friend.. great words of a great write ... luv..
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Date: 10/23/2011 11:48:00 AM
wow...where do you plagiarise all this delicious imagery Nance hahaha?? best w Syd
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:23:00 PM
May hope indeed come to us as we interpret new awareness--awareness truly beyond the labels of speech. nice imagery.
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