William Kelii Kekaula Poet Tetractys

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Day Washing

Day Washing

The washing neatly hung o'er outside lines
expose to sun
plus ample
zephyrs
whiffs

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thrifts
heifers
less ample
appose begun
their brainwashing among pour about lines

10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
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2020 November 15
*2nd Place*
Double Tetractys 6
~~Eve Roper
Picture #1

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Linda Alice Fowler December 7, 2020 at 8:37 AM Terrific William - I love "...their brainwashing..." Congratulations on the win! :) Linda William Kelii Kekaula December 7, 2020 at 11:17 AM So nice of you, Linda, for highlighting your awareness, thank you, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2020 at 3:16 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful win, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula December 7, 2020 at 11:14 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your wondrous thoughtfulness, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman December 6, 2020 at 10:40 AM This poem does reflect the depth of your mastery of the poetic, William. Congratulations on your win! William Kelii Kekaula December 6, 2020 at 11:17 AM Thank you, Sam, for your intricacies with details my friend, Aloha!

Jan Allison December 5, 2020 at 4:44 PM very descriptive William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx William Kelii Kekaula December 5, 2020 at 8:04 PM Thank you, Jan, for your enlightening words, Aloha!

Susan Ashley December 5, 2020 at 10:06 AM A lovely interpretation of the picture, William. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan William Kelii Kekaula December 5, 2020 at 10:21 AM Thank you, Susan, for it was kind of you to say, Aloha!

Jo Chamberlain December 5, 2020 at 1:00 AM Nothing beats those days when you can get all your bedding on the line, and back on your bed within a couple of hours. :-) lovely and fresh. Congratulations on your winning placement. William Kelii Kekaula December 5, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thank you, Joanna, for your wondrous thoughtfulness, appreciate it, Aloha!

Eve Roper December 4, 2020 at 10:50 PM Congratulations on your winning placement, William. Thank you for participating in the contest. Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula December 5, 2020 at 9:05 AM Thank you, Eve, for another opportunity, looking forward to more, Aloha!