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GREECE. Island of Mykonos. 1957. Rene Burri (With images) | Photo, Black and white photography, Rene

Day Washing The washing neatly hung o'er outside lines expose to sun plus ample zephyrs whiffs ~0~ thrifts heifers less ample appose begun their brainwashing among pour about lines 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 . 2020 November 15 *2nd Place* Double Tetractys 6 ~~Eve Roper Picture #1

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/7/2020 8:37:00 AM

Terrific William - I love "...their brainwashing..." Congratulations on the win! :) Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2020 11:17:00 AM

So nice of you, Linda, for highlighting your awareness, thank you, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2020 3:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2020 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your wondrous thoughtfulness, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/6/2020 10:40:00 AM

This poem does reflect the depth of your mastery of the poetic, William. Congratulations on your win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/6/2020 11:17:00 AM

Thank you, Sam, for your intricacies with details my friend, Aloha!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2020 4:44:00 PM

very descriptive William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/5/2020 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your enlightening words, Aloha!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/5/2020 10:06:00 AM

A lovely interpretation of the picture, William. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/5/2020 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Susan, for it was kind of you to say, Aloha!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 12/5/2020 1:00:00 AM

Nothing beats those days when you can get all your bedding on the line, and back on your bed within a couple of hours. :-) lovely and fresh. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/5/2020 9:10:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna, for your wondrous thoughtfulness, appreciate it, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2020 10:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement, William. Thank you for participating in the contest. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/5/2020 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, for another opportunity, looking forward to more, Aloha!