Day Remembered

Nicely done, and I like how you used leaves in the last line. Though not the noun leaves, it reminded me of them.

Very nicely written. Conjures up vivid images of a beautiful season.

thanks for stopping by..Sara

donns! you thrill me, thrill me!.. delightful tanka..:) huggs

Nature displays her beauty in colors unsurpassed! Marvelous, Donna!

Hi Donna, A most colorful write! Well done my friend.. Ken

- A goodbye with a firework, a lovely poem Donna! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

You have that special something that not many of us guys have! Whatever form of peotry you write... you master it! Kudos Donna dear Donna! Hugs, Jack xoox

Fall is so sad and so exquisite its hard to feel it all and let it go. Light & Love

great tanka my friend Donna. Cheers ;)

whooa, i want to dance with you... enchanting for a first try, my donns..:) soup mail!..

I do so love this time of year! Simple and effective piece makes me smile.

This is a very special write my friend, full of beauty of autumn glory! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, extremely awesome, Great Work!!

very nicely said :-)

Beautiful....MD....Swirling colors of beauty reflecting your lovely soul...Love you

Enjoyed reading this one today..The colors of fall are wonderful and are slowly falling off now...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is appreciated..The brown spider had not rebuilt his/her web this morning..There was just two little lengths of webbing up there..Sara

I'm sure it's obvious this is my first attempt at this form...:-) ...just trying to learn something different.....:-) ...just fun!

this short poem of yours give a delightful feeling of looking ahead for a better tomorrow. :)