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Day Remembered

sunrise and sunset every color is there as autumn leaves twirl dancing - each day remembered leaves this season with such flare ©Donna Jones 11-3-2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 12:58:00 AM

Nicely done, and I like how you used leaves in the last line. Though not the noun leaves, it reminded me of them.

Vincent Flannery

Date: 11/7/2013 6:00:00 PM

Very nicely written. Conjures up vivid images of a beautiful season.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2013 5:25:00 PM

thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 9:56:00 AM

donns! you thrill me, thrill me!.. delightful tanka..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/6/2013 4:42:00 AM

Nature displays her beauty in colors unsurpassed! Marvelous, Donna!

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/5/2013 4:49:00 PM

Hi Donna, A most colorful write! Well done my friend.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/4/2013 3:17:00 PM

- A goodbye with a firework, a lovely poem Donna! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/4/2013 3:07:00 PM

You have that special something that not many of us guys have! Whatever form of peotry you write... you master it! Kudos Donna dear Donna! Hugs, Jack xoox

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/4/2013 3:07:00 PM

Fall is so sad and so exquisite its hard to feel it all and let it go. Light & Love

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/4/2013 12:38:00 PM

great tanka my friend Donna. Cheers ;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/4/2013 8:03:00 AM

whooa, i want to dance with you... enchanting for a first try, my donns..:) soup mail!..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2013 8:02:00 AM

I do so love this time of year! Simple and effective piece makes me smile.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/3/2013 8:09:00 PM

This is a very special write my friend, full of beauty of autumn glory! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, extremely awesome, Great Work!!

Julie Heckman

Date: 11/3/2013 7:50:00 PM

very nicely said :-)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/3/2013 1:38:00 PM

Beautiful....MD....Swirling colors of beauty reflecting your lovely soul...Love you

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2013 12:42:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..The colors of fall are wonderful and are slowly falling off now...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is appreciated..The brown spider had not rebuilt his/her web this morning..There was just two little lengths of webbing up there..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 11/3/2013 11:48:00 AM

I'm sure it's obvious this is my first attempt at this form...:-) ...just trying to learn something different.....:-) ...just fun!

Lena Emp

Date: 11/3/2013 9:18:00 AM

this short poem of yours give a delightful feeling of looking ahead for a better tomorrow. :)

Donna Jones
Date: 11/3/2013 11:31:00 AM

Thank you for your visit....