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Day Remembered

sunrise and sunset
every color is there
as autumn leaves twirl
dancing   -  each day remembered
leaves this season with such flare

©Donna Jones
11-3-2013

Copyright © Donna Jones | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/9/2013 12:58:00 AM Nicely done, and I like how you used leaves in the last line. Though not the noun leaves, it reminded me of them. Login to Reply

Vincent Flannery Date: 11/7/2013 6:00:00 PM Very nicely written. Conjures up vivid images of a beautiful season. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/7/2013 5:25:00 PM thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/6/2013 9:56:00 AM donns! you thrill me, thrill me!.. delightful tanka..:) huggs Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/6/2013 4:42:00 AM Nature displays her beauty in colors unsurpassed! Marvelous, Donna! Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 11/5/2013 4:49:00 PM Hi Donna, A most colorful write! Well done my friend.. Ken Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2013 3:17:00 PM - A goodbye with a firework, a lovely poem Donna! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 11/4/2013 3:07:00 PM You have that special something that not many of us guys have! Whatever form of peotry you write... you master it! Kudos Donna dear Donna! Hugs, Jack xoox Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/4/2013 3:07:00 PM Fall is so sad and so exquisite its hard to feel it all and let it go. Light & Love Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 11/4/2013 12:38:00 PM great tanka my friend Donna. Cheers ;) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/4/2013 8:03:00 AM whooa, i want to dance with you... enchanting for a first try, my donns..:) soup mail!.. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/4/2013 8:02:00 AM I do so love this time of year! Simple and effective piece makes me smile. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/3/2013 8:09:00 PM This is a very special write my friend, full of beauty of autumn glory! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, extremely awesome, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Julie Heckman Date: 11/3/2013 7:50:00 PM very nicely said :-) Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/3/2013 1:38:00 PM Beautiful....MD....Swirling colors of beauty reflecting your lovely soul...Love you Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/3/2013 12:42:00 PM Enjoyed reading this one today..The colors of fall are wonderful and are slowly falling off now...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is appreciated..The brown spider had not rebuilt his/her web this morning..There was just two little lengths of webbing up there..Sara Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 11/3/2013 11:48:00 AM I'm sure it's obvious this is my first attempt at this form...:-) ...just trying to learn something different.....:-) ...just fun! Login to Reply

Lena Emp Date: 11/3/2013 9:18:00 AM this short poem of yours give a delightful feeling of looking ahead for a better tomorrow. :) Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 11/3/2013 11:31:00 AM Thank you for your visit....