Day One

Day one crept
gently like
the rising sun.
A theater of dreams;
Unconscious streams
of thoughts,
Led by the frowns
of clowns.
Endless chains of heroes
on parade;
Disposable cowards
in a charade,
Bowed their heads
and crowned a madman
Again and again.

Through a reign of pain
tired minds had tried,
un-tired, retired.
A fool discovered
that hope lasts longer
between stretches
of hunger.
But nobody listened.
They haven't learned
from day one.
By the setting sun,
it's gone.
Today began.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 9:02 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 23, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Dean, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 16, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Dean, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:12 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
Posey Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:20 AM
Dean, this is one of the most unappreciated posts I have ever read... Your talent brings pleas for continuing posts by your talented pen.....Your writing is a joy to read and very inspirational.... Jake
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July 8, 2013 at 4:09 PM
- One good written poem, Dean. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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