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Day One

Day one crept gently like the rising sun. A theater of dreams; Unconscious streams of thoughts, Led by the frowns of clowns. Endless chains of heroes on parade; Disposable cowards in a charade, Bowed their heads and crowned a madman Again and again. Through a reign of pain tired minds had tried, un-tired, retired. A fool discovered that hope lasts longer between stretches of hunger. But nobody listened. They haven't learned from day one. By the setting sun, it's gone. Today began.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:34:00 PM
Dean, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:03:00 PM
Dean, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:12:00 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:20:00 AM
Dean, this is one of the most unappreciated posts I have ever read... Your talent brings pleas for continuing posts by your talented pen.....Your writing is a joy to read and very inspirational.... Jake
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Date: 7/8/2013 4:09:00 PM
- One good written poem, Dean. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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