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Day of Reckoning

Tis his pity Day of days to cry. Day of reckoning that will be When we all stand guilty Before throne of mercy Our eternal destiny To decide Is he.

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/5/2016 11:51:00 AM

Hi, Messoh...Your poem is beautiful but the form you've used is not ghazal. Poetry soup has a good example for this form...

Messoh Vincent
Date: 7/8/2016 9:01:00 PM

I was actually using a phone with very small fonts to post the poem, so when I wanted to click on free verse, my finger clicked on ghazal but I didn't realize, so I posted it that way..... Am grateful for your constructive comment

Messoh Vincent
Date: 7/8/2016 8:57:00 PM

Thanks my dear for your keenness, it has helped me notice the mistake and you are still welcome to visit my page, read my poems, comment and even rate them.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2016 1:46:00 AM

Messoh, the day will be here... enjoyed. LINDA

Messoh Vincent
Date: 7/4/2016 12:36:00 AM

Am glad my dear,and thanks for passing by...#hugs