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Day In The Life Of A Donkey Part Three

The town which oozed the plain and lacklustre held them in a judo grip but by the same token itself seemed to become slyly going into step by step morph contraction.
“Donkeys are symbolic to a vast extent.
They exude such, indeed much ken.
Are they guffawing at us?
But just as you and I had our first encounter as children when on a short trip with our parents.
It was one of the few  forms of entertainment available in this mystery shroud of a spot.
Where disposable income might be too easily disposed of.”
Both Nigella and Nigel found that ever since they met  whilst nourishing the donkey, this donkey, its Mise en scene, its portentous presence had this uncanny knack of pursuit of both of them.
The strangest coincidences.
Idioms, expressions, the way people interacted, the synonyms for donkey in this town created a situation where the word donkey and a donkey’s environs, and other creatures in the habitat had this hypnotising invisible secretive yet insidious skulk.   
“Have you even sensed, Nigella,a disconcerting shift and shunt  this isolated district, the size, there has been a slow exit to boot. On boot.
Does it have its own booty?
We both smirk at that one.
Even as we interact  there is this intended or unintended prank simmering….somewhere. 
As if we might be shoehorned into a loosely scheduled drama.”
Nigel and nigella  often mused and bandied about  words  asinine and their variants.
But  devoid of concrete proposal or narrative  life pulse  in this strangeville of a town that was now a drift sand  physically and in terms of folks who no longer existed resembled an abstruse puzzle when it shouldn't
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:45 PM
A fun read for the reader. Enjoy your day writing away.........
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 5:28 AM
So, Nigel and Nigella are brother and sister plus they are visiting this place where they think the people are donkeys and them the only normal ones. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 6:00 AM
Thanks for reading this instalment. Sara, at the beginning of the story I did refer to Nigel and Nigella as a couple. They are from the area but I didn’t specifically mention that. Pets and donkeys like humans can feel trapped. They both can attempt to escape boredom only to find other areas can be boring too. People often dream of other places and go there. Some find fulfillment others don’t. Overarching themes of, success, failure, boredom, return, and coincidence. I hope that sheds some light on any confusion which is my fault. Once more thank you for your visits and time, Howard
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 8:47 PM
Ok. I see it clearly here that the two characters are observing the donkey. Best part of the story so far, Howard
Kerr Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 10:26 PM
Thanks for that, Andrea. I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Howard
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