Day Dreams

The wife saw it all in a dream
The milkman delivered fresh cream
The postman came first
(She thought he would burst)
The newsboy fit her colour scheme
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Bauer Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Oh, Rico! You do have a way with words!
Leffanta Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 6:28 PM
I wish I had your command of the language, e.g., your POTD poem yesterday, "Supreme Indignation"! Aloha!
Canerdy Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Such are the dreams of the everyday housewife (from an old song), Rico! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 6:27 PM
There is safety in dreams! Aloha!
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 3:07 AM
What goes through your mind to come up with such funny lines, Rico? Don't answer that! lol
Leffanta Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 6:27 PM
Mae West famously said, "An hard man is good to find!" Mae also expressed a concern of women everywhere when she said, "It was hard enough to get him alone, and then it wasn't hard enough!" Aloha!
George Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 11:53 PM
Every one seems to have a place in her life, except her husband ! What a dream... :)
Leffanta Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Most wives spend 1/3rd of the day in bed with their husband - hardly the stuff of daydreams! Plus most adult men need to recover from one 30-second flush, whereas most women were just primed for seconds - at least in their dreams! Aloha!
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Enjoyed like always, Rico.
Leffanta Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 6:26 PM
Mahalo, Eve! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 7:05 PM
OMG, what a dream! And...the husband??? No room for him, eh?
Leffanta Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Dreams have time for everyone!
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