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As Sun dawns; shy sky sighs; Clouds, bright fawns, roam on highs. On calm lake, lit leaves sail, As light flake lay long rail… Wreath of hills crowns the earth. Cool breeze thrills, each new birth. #4 24 August 2021 In Essence 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 8/28/2021 7:33:00 PM
Great rhyme , Christuraj, congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/28/2021 3:31:00 PM
Very nicely penned Christuraj, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/28/2021 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. Few words with much said. Love this line, "Cool breeze thrills, each new birth." Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
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Date: 8/24/2021 5:39:00 AM
Beautifull imagery... Great rhymes ...
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Date: 8/24/2021 5:47:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/23/2021 11:43:00 PM
Superb! Well done. I found this tough. I realised I have not put picture number in my entry. See all make mistakes.
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Date: 8/24/2021 1:27:00 AM
Have you put the number later?

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