Day of the Bees

Through her window,she could see nothing in the clear blue sky. 
Its deep colour was reflected in the calm waters 
Of the estuary  which spread out in the distance. 
Even the normal busy shipping traffic 
Seemed to have been lulled to sleep this hot summer afternoon. 
There would usually be the sound of ships' horns 
Out in the Elbe as they signalled for the lock gates to open.
 
Water was calm, sky was calm.
It felt to Petra that she was looking at a painting where nothing
Was really alive but only replicated in oilpaint. 

The ever-growing buzz in the sky was the only indication that the scene was real. 
Others had heard the sound as well.
Like hundreds of bees,  but these had a special sting

The temperature was  high and it was very dry
There had been no rain for some time.  Now there was  a rain of bombs.
Petra saw the explosions through her window before she heard them
In the distance as the skyful of   B17 s unloaded their cargoes.
Petra and her little sister were terrified, struck immobile in fright.  
Their window bellied in like a giant glass balloon suddenly over-inflated, 
And jagged, face-ripping shards of glass snarled across the hall 
And embedded themselves in the cushions of the sofa.
The woolly innards of the cushions spewed out, 
Dangling lifeless from the slash-wounds. 
Luckily the girls were not cut.

Suddenly, the whole area became one big fire 
With air being sucked in with the force of a storm.
Fires  joined together, temperatures rose to melting lead,  
Wind speed picked up to hurricane levels, 
Trees were hurled into the flames, furniture, cars, even people hurled in.
Fire trucks unable  to get through roads blocked by rubble.
Dying by carbon monoxide poisoning
When all the air was drawn out of their basement shelters,
The shelters were filled, but few people were really alive.

And then it was over. As the exploding fireballs gradually died away, 
The drone and throb of the buzzing B17s faded off 
To the blue sky of the east, to torment some other part of the city. 
Walls crashed to the ground, gas lines exploded, people cried and screamed,
The girls shook with terror, but the B17s had gone. 
History called it 28 July 1943  -  Hamburg firestorm.  
Petra always called it  Day of the Bees.

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Entered in Debbie Guzzi's Contest  Hot Time Summer in the City

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/18/2012 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2012 2:06:00 PM
I would categorize this as poetic prose, and throw in a few more periods ;) Still no form was asked for and how can anyone deny the poetry in phrases like [ jagged, face-ripping shards of glass snarled across the hall] or [woolly innards of the cushions spewed] You have gifted us with a city RAW as all cities can be. A privelege to read such a write. Light & Love always
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Date: 6/17/2012 9:40:00 AM
I don't want this one to end here.....Is this part of a novel you are writing? I would love to know where the inspiration is coming from here. Wow...!
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/17/2012 1:22:00 PM
The poem is lifted almost line by line from my short story ( also called Day of the Bees ) ..... it was posted in my blog last week. If you cant find it let me know and I will soupmail it....Syd
Date: 6/16/2012 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Sidney!
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