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I have re-posted this because I inadvertently deleted it while deleting 'my excuses post'

let me know if I've done it wrong as I did not keep a copy, that's if anyone had printed it

off.'

Spring shell, breaks softly Februarys 'pale' is passed.. Voice of thrush; Cracking...'

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Date: 12/25/2021 3:13:00 PM
Good of you to make comment Andrea, I Was checking on this write and saw I Had not replied to comments when I posted.' God bless.)
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:28:00 PM
This is wonderful , Joe, I I can visualize it so clearly and hear the thrush breaking into my reverie not unwelcomed. SuZ
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/25/2021 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne, so good to Read your comment, I hope You are well.' I shall drop by To visit'
Date: 3/2/2016 8:25:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/25/2021 3:11:00 PM
Hi Funom, thank you for putting Your thoughts here, all my best Wishes.'
Date: 2/25/2016 7:56:00 PM
I love the sights and sounds for your imagery in this one. NICE.
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Date: 2/16/2016 3:15:00 PM
Yes, February is pale to the beauty of spring..I don't know if we have a bird called the thrush around here..I looked it up and could not decide if what we call a sparrow is a thrush or if they are two separate species..Probably two separate species...Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/25/2021 3:14:00 PM
Hi Sara, good of you to visit And I appreciate your comment God bless.'
Date: 2/14/2016 1:33:00 AM
Sorry to require the explanation, but thanks for opening me up to the greater picture.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/14/2016 11:53:00 AM
No problem Scott, you are welcome anytime..'
Date: 2/11/2016 12:23:00 PM
if it's syllables that you're worried about, there is even a syllable counter here on PS. I like what you've written. I'm not so sure what February's pale refers to, but the thrush chick is great.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/13/2016 12:42:00 AM
No Scott thanks, its the word order I was thinking on good of you to look in though'