Dawn's Serenade

Dawn’s Serenade Pacing the foothills of adoration… collecting thoughts on garden walkways, reaching for a hyacinth, strolling neath an arbor of opened arms yearning for your heart in fragrant aromas . . . “For this longing builds of sun warmed wishes and morning glory hopes” Rose petals call you by name, harmonic melodies in breathless breezes as four leaf clover dotted lawns offer chiffon coated whispers on Sunday afternoon porch swings . . . “I sway to their song, mesmerized by the beauty that is you” As shadows grow, twilight brings with it the gleaming effects of the evening’s first star, pale in glow next to you as even the cloudiest skies can not diminish the sunset beauty of your eyes . . . “Within my mind these chestnut gems twinkle in unison with dancing constellations” The time now comes to rest, to dream of waterfall passions, lost in your kiss, whispers on satin skin caressing mine, drenched in the moon’s soft light creating silhouettes of love floating in desire . . . “As I drift off, soothed by your essence, awaiting dawn’s serenade to a brand new day in your arms” Good night Soupers See you soon
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Chircop Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 4:19 PM
This is extremely beautiful ..'diminish the sunset beauty of your eyes'..Awesome.
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May 22, 2017 at 4:39 PM
I am happy you liked this one so much my sweet friend. I always look forward to your visits Charmaine. You always make me smile.
Ricci Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Hi Chris. The credit belongs to you and your poetic work.
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May 22, 2017 at 9:29 AM
:)
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May 22, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Can picture you with your penning romance. Seeing through your eyes is a great day, Chris!
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May 22, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so very much Kim.
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May 20, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Hello Chris. Good Morning. You say to us "see you soon" so I don't know when you will see this. This is extremely lovely and poetic. May each dawn be a serenade as you describe. You so embrace the world nature and yes love itself with expression of beauty and flair. Honestly. Wonderful entirely and completely. Welcome back whenever that is.
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May 22, 2017 at 8:48 AM
"See you soon" can mean many different things but this time it meant Monday. :) So...here I am! Thank you Lisa, so much my friend. You are always so nice to me and I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. This big smile I am wearing is because of you. :)
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May 20, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Very sweet Chis
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May 22, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much Tim. I am happy you liked this one.
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May 20, 2017 at 6:42 AM
I don't think I've met anyone that can write as romantically as you, Chris :) Your sweet words seem to be unending, and I hope you never change. Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs
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May 22, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so very much Becca, that is such a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate your kindness always my friend.
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May 20, 2017 at 3:34 AM
I am inspired by this awesome piece Chris! A poem within a poem may be discovered by reading through your quoted couplets alone. They so enhance the body of your poem as brief exclamations of desire and admiring love n the beauty of poetry. 7 ; )
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May 22, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Connie, I truly appreciate your kindness. You always leave comments on my poems that make me smile and inspire me to write more. Thank you again my friend.
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May 20, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Have a wonderful weekend Chris, spent the way you like to spend it. No better way to say goodbye than with this beautiful love poem. Sleep well my friend :)
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May 22, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thanks so very much my friend, I'd say have a great weekend to you but it's Monday again. :) But from what I hear you are having a great Monday. :)
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May 19, 2017 at 10:51 PM
Written like a sweet dream, as usual your creativity amazes me. Very lovely read Chris :) Good Night
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May 22, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Thank you so very much Lenna for always leaving such kind comments on my poetry. I appreciate you my friend.
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May 19, 2017 at 10:29 PM
So beautiful as always, I find it so soothing to read at the end of a long night!
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May 22, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Arthur, I am happy you liked it.
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May 19, 2017 at 8:05 PM
This poem embodies a kaleidoscope of colors and a fountain of sparkling phases that paint and create magic upon the page. It tantalizes us with succulent imagery, to seduce us with the nectar of poetic creativity. This is written by the hand of a man who has felt love, and knows of what he speaks. Emile.
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May 22, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Thanks so very much Emile for your wonderful comment on my poem. I am happy you liked it.
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