Jeanne Mcgee Poet Quintilla

Dawns Arrival

As the morning carries different bird song
My body stirs from its cozy slumber, begone
Aloft to the mountains volcanized hard crest
Dark clouds beat upon its jagged green breast
Then raindrops fall down in a long mighty yawn

The sun fights back to bring on the silvery dawn
So full are the colors of rainbow phenomenon
I wake to nature’s bounty completely impressed
Like sitting at the table as a humble breakfast guest
To see her splendor spun in swirls of bright chiffon

Green is the valley that man tills with his brawn
Growing rich gifts of the land it does spawn
As dawn wanes to noon for earths timely request
I let go of the morning feeling happily blessed
My head filled with pictures nature has drawn

written 9-22-2019
copy right protected 2019 Jeanne McGee
San Pedro, Guatemala

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Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2019 at 1:08 AM What a remarkable morning you had! Wow! Bravo! Keep having them. This seems to inspire you to poetry my friend!

Reason A. Poteet September 24, 2019 at 8:24 AM Here to check out your quintellas, Jeanne. We know missionaries in Guatemala who manage a school/home for abused children called La Senda. In Sumpango, I think??? Love the thought of nature drawing pictures. A beautiful write, Thanks for sharing. Jeanne Mcgee September 24, 2019 at 8:58 AM I am studying Spanish at the CorazonMaya school. They also give money to help the local school children. It is such a beautiful country.

Hello There September 22, 2019 at 8:58 PM I really enjoyed this, Jeanne, especially the second and third stanzas. A beautiful image shared ~ <3 Jeanne Mcgee September 23, 2019 at 8:08 PM Hello There, thank you for coming by for a read.

Lindsay Laurie September 22, 2019 at 8:36 PM Hello Jeanne … certainly some nice picturesque scenes from the best time of the day - an enjoyable verse to read Jeanne, thank you - Lindsay Jeanne Mcgee September 23, 2019 at 8:07 PM thank you for stopping by LIndsay.

Sunlite Wanter September 22, 2019 at 4:27 PM Beautiful writing, took me to happy places. Jeanne Mcgee September 22, 2019 at 8:06 PM What a nice compliment. Thanks for coming by for a read.

Heidi Sands September 22, 2019 at 1:12 PM I am thrilled to be led to this today. This is beautiful! I also love the line, raindrops fall down in a long mighty yawn. Well written and a fav! :) Jeanne Mcgee September 22, 2019 at 8:05 PM Thanks you for your appreciation...I'm so happy I hit a warm spot for your day.

Gershon Wolf September 22, 2019 at 12:59 PM --just as you have filled my head with pictures of a lovely dawn! Thank you, Jeanne. Cheers, Gershon Jeanne Mcgee September 22, 2019 at 8:06 PM Thanks for coming by for a read of my newest poem Gershon.