Dawns Arrival

As the morning carries different bird song My body stirs from its cozy slumber, begone Aloft to the mountains volcanized hard crest Dark clouds beat upon its jagged green breast Then raindrops fall down in a long mighty yawn The sun fights back to bring on the silvery dawn So full are the colors of rainbow phenomenon I wake to nature’s bounty completely impressed Like sitting at the table as a humble breakfast guest To see her splendor spun in swirls of bright chiffon Green is the valley that man tills with his brawn Growing rich gifts of the land it does spawn As dawn wanes to noon for earths timely request I let go of the morning feeling happily blessed My head filled with pictures nature has drawn written 9-22-2019 copy right protected 2019 Jeanne McGee San Pedro, Guatemala

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Date: 9/27/2019 1:08:00 AM
What a remarkable morning you had! Wow! Bravo! Keep having them. This seems to inspire you to poetry my friend!
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Date: 9/24/2019 8:24:00 AM
Here to check out your quintellas, Jeanne. We know missionaries in Guatemala who manage a school/home for abused children called La Senda. In Sumpango, I think??? Love the thought of nature drawing pictures. A beautiful write, Thanks for sharing.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/24/2019 8:58:00 AM
I am studying Spanish at the CorazonMaya school. They also give money to help the local school children. It is such a beautiful country.
Date: 9/22/2019 8:58:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, Jeanne, especially the second and third stanzas. A beautiful image shared ~ <3
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2019 8:08:00 PM
Hello There, thank you for coming by for a read.
Date: 9/22/2019 8:36:00 PM
Hello Jeanne … certainly some nice picturesque scenes from the best time of the day - an enjoyable verse to read Jeanne, thank you - Lindsay
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2019 8:07:00 PM
thank you for stopping by LIndsay.
Date: 9/22/2019 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful writing, took me to happy places.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/22/2019 8:06:00 PM
What a nice compliment. Thanks for coming by for a read.
Date: 9/22/2019 1:12:00 PM
I am thrilled to be led to this today. This is beautiful! I also love the line, raindrops fall down in a long mighty yawn. Well written and a fav! :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/22/2019 8:05:00 PM
Thanks you for your appreciation...I'm so happy I hit a warm spot for your day.
Date: 9/22/2019 12:59:00 PM
--just as you have filled my head with pictures of a lovely dawn! Thank you, Jeanne. Cheers, Gershon
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/22/2019 8:06:00 PM
Thanks for coming by for a read of my newest poem Gershon.
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