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Dawning Sky

warm July dawning sky is cerulean blue Venus bids day g'morn
Written July 2, 2022 for "The Sky in July" Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich [syllables checked by HMS]

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Date: 7/3/2022 6:59:00 AM
Very nice L Milton. I imagine Venus is more of a Botticelli than a de Milo; but really not mattering which; for the image would still be quote a sight to see. Thanks for the poem...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/4/2022 8:09:00 AM
Touché...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jeff. I just made a slight adjustment in the poem, so I hope you read the corrected version. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 7/3/2022 5:37:00 AM
Beautifull written and picturesque, Milton. Good luck in the contest, my friend. PS: Thanks for stopping by...hope you're doing well. Charles
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Charles, for your thoughts. It is good to hear from you. I have missed you. I'm doing okay, but lots of medical crap this summer!
Date: 7/3/2022 1:46:00 AM
So gorgeously penned Hank. Bravo!
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