For Joseph May's One In Five Poetry Contest
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Dawn wakes nature; gold sun I see. In orange sky it rises bright with radiance enchanting me. Dawn wakes nature. Peeking down, sun shimmers its light. There is a river running free where birds are floating – a sweet sight. As if it heard King Sun’s decree, one bird, wings spread, prepares for flight to follow river to the sea. Dawn wakes nature. Image #1
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