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For Joseph May's One In Five Poetry Contest

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Dawn wakes nature; gold sun I see. In orange sky it rises bright with radiance enchanting me. Dawn wakes nature. Peeking down, sun shimmers its light. There is a river running free where birds are floating – a sweet sight. As if it heard King Sun’s decree, one bird, wings spread, prepares for flight to follow river to the sea. Dawn wakes nature. Image #1

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Date: 7/7/2025 10:18:00 PM
This is a beauty. Apt interpretation of the prompt. Congrats.
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Date: 7/7/2025 6:40:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this lovely poem! Effective use of personification. Janice
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Date: 7/6/2025 6:42:00 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea, Congrats on your win in my contest
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Date: 6/23/2025 1:42:00 PM
So pretty in the soft shades of dawn, Andrea! Wonderful images that really describe the picture in soothing morning light. Best wishes for the contest! So glad I found it. Blessings.
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Date: 6/23/2025 11:07:00 AM
Beautiful! We are in a continually dawn, as spirit opens to light. Marvelous writing! Thank you.
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Date: 6/23/2025 10:18:00 AM
Nice poem with matching picture.
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Date: 6/23/2025 8:07:00 AM
Such a sweet and gentle flow to match the image.
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Date: 6/23/2025 5:41:00 AM
Sweet!
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Date: 6/22/2025 8:00:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful poem, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 6/22/2025 7:59:00 PM
Enjoyed…yes, when God strikes the match of sunrise, so much comes to life!
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Date: 6/22/2025 7:15:00 PM
Yes, lovely... and answers the eternal question: Whose dawn is the sun's?
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Date: 6/22/2025 5:36:00 PM
This is so so lovely!!
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