Dawn To Dusk Minuet

strange how the day shuts down, suddenly bleak, as when the dawn crested three-quarters past six. cumbersome eyelids befriend pen and ink — outline of skinny trees, lack of stars, hush’d homes — fig leaves do not hide them. visible neighbors smoking chimneys. the sooted smell of winterscape as she falls fast asleep. 12/18/2019
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:55 AM
I love the way you started this poem, grabbing me by my imagination.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 6:24 AM
A poetic lullaby that soothes the soul dearest, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Green Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 7:02 AM
A soothing piece to lull one to sleep on a cold winter evening. Really nice Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 9:18 AM
For you to say that...thank you so much, Chris!
Pandit Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Enjoyed the content, details, imagery--excellent write, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 1:44 AM
Ah, tenderness in poetic form! Ahhhhh
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Thanks so much! xx
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