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Dawn To Dusk Minuet

strange how the day shuts down, suddenly bleak, as when the dawn crested three-quarters past six. cumbersome eyelids befriend pen and ink — outline of skinny trees, lack of stars, hush’d homes — fig leaves do not hide them. visible neighbors smoking chimneys. the sooted smell of winterscape as she falls fast asleep. 12/18/2019

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Date: 12/22/2019 10:55:00 AM
I love the way you started this poem, grabbing me by my imagination.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2019 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 12/20/2019 6:24:00 AM
A poetic lullaby that soothes the soul dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2019 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 12/19/2019 7:02:00 AM
A soothing piece to lull one to sleep on a cold winter evening. Really nice Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2019 9:18:00 AM
For you to say that...thank you so much, Chris!
Date: 12/19/2019 6:54:00 AM
Enjoyed the content, details, imagery--excellent write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Date: 12/19/2019 1:44:00 AM
Ah, tenderness in poetic form! Ahhhhh
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thanks so much! xx

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