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4/6/2025 for Etheree Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

Dawn to Dusk

Pop!
sunshine
and birdsong
awaken them.
The boy gardener,
the sprout breaking the earth,
with the birds, they arise first,
leaving their beds to gather sun,
reflecting, quietly excited,
soil cultivated -   a dream realized.
Vibrant growth, vines branch exponentially,
fueled by the sun, new life triumphs,
as boy and plant conquer the earth.
In time, nature sings it song,
flowers bloom, fruit ripens
as old vines wither
and turn to seed,
resting in
silent
night.
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Agustin Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 11:49 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
Crandall Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 3:02 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Beata!
mysore Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Crandall Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
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