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4/6/2025 for Etheree Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

Pop! sunshine and birdsong awaken them. The boy gardener, the sprout breaking the earth, with the birds, they arise first, leaving their beds to gather sun, reflecting, quietly excited, soil cultivated -   a dream realized. Vibrant growth, vines branch exponentially, fueled by the sun, new life triumphs, as boy and plant conquer the earth. In time, nature sings it song, flowers bloom, fruit ripens as old vines wither and turn to seed, resting in silent night.

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Date: 4/18/2025 11:49:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
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David Crandall
Date: 4/19/2025 3:02:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Beata!
Date: 4/18/2025 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/18/2025 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni!

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