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See my latest blog dated 26/2/2026: 'The Jueju - Straight from the Horse's Mouth'

Dawn Song

Dawn song / sweet trills / thin flute roused
Splayed light / warm vibe / worn slats doused
Dream haunts / harsh cough / plumb tears smart
Heart touched / mixed thoughts / frail past frouse

feelingsimagememorynaturepeoplejueju

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L Milton Hankins

March 30, 2021 at 9:10 AM

All I can do is respond like Susan...WOW! The time and effort that went into this alone commands utmost respect. This is difficult, tedious, mind-bending writing for anyone who might think it is easy! Good stuff, Sus. Keep up the good work!

Suzette Richards

March 30, 2021 at 11:14 AM

Many thanks for your support, and kind comments.

Susan Woodrow

March 30, 2021 at 8:10 AM

Wow! So much better and moodier but also the last words fit now This should be the jueju explanation and example for soup :)

Suzette Richards

March 30, 2021 at 8:04 PM

lol - another purist. ;)) Thank ever so much for your help - I can only grow with the assistance of poets like you. Again, thank you.

Susan Woodrow

March 30, 2021 at 7:14 PM

Now i feel obliged to go relabel my Jamaica write as general verse hehe i was feeling rebellious at the time but not against the Chinese :))

Suzette Richards

March 30, 2021 at 12:31 PM

I would be honoured if PoetrySoup.com would consider your suggestion. As I am not a Premium Member, I doubt whether they would pay attention to a suggestion by me (I might be wrong, though). :))

Suzette Richards

March 30, 2021 at 11:12 AM

Thank you for this high praise.

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