Dawn of the Grim Reaper

a very creative and well written piece jack. thank you for reading and commemting on My Sweet Brandy.

I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to read and thank you for your kind comments Jack. Love, Carol

jack, I am glad you feel like you are learning from all the many poems posted here! Nice seeing you today.

That's the Grim Reaper put in his place Jack, nice one. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Jack, what a way for a women to roll,,, I heard once that women reapers can fold into bunch of butterflies... a great way for a sunrise contest,,, thanks and good luck,..p.d.

Super imaginative Jack.. luv the Grim Reaper reference my friend.. good luck in the contest.. I am getting into writing shorter poems myself luv.. much said in few lines... awesome..

Not a morning person huh...Enjoyed reading this eve..Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by with a kind review..Sara

Good for her, Jack. Great little Tanka. Thank you for commenting. Love, Joyce

Thanks for your comment on Stifle, Jack. Your poem here takes on a whole new meaning now that I know what Beth had to say about Janie! Love, Carolyn

oooh, kind of eerie. Even the grim reaper does not want a grouch. haha. Or maybe just someone who refuses to be taken by surprise or to go without a fight! I liked it!!

Nice character sketch of Janie, jack

Thanks for the note, Jack. I would love to meet Janie. Sounds like a feisty lady! Love, Carolyn

just wow, jack.. you took this on the highway! :) huggs, nette

this is good I like it nicely done.. cory

Really like the way she scowls at the Grim Reaper and he "slinks" away. Very cool poem, Jack. If it is for the Sunrise contest, you have quite a creative and unique entry. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn