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Dawn of the Grim Reaper

Grim Reaper strolls in Stands looking down at her face She opens an eye Then sits up in bed, scowling Grim Reaper slinks off next door Sunrise Jack Horne For my friend Janie

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James Foulk

Date: 5/17/2011 1:00:00 PM

a very creative and well written piece jack. thank you for reading and commemting on My Sweet Brandy.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 4:46:00 AM

I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to read and thank you for your kind comments Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2011 12:22:00 AM

jack, I am glad you feel like you are learning from all the many poems posted here! Nice seeing you today.

James Fraser

Date: 5/13/2011 3:49:00 PM

That's the Grim Reaper put in his place Jack, nice one. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 12:25:00 PM

Jack, what a way for a women to roll,,, I heard once that women reapers can fold into bunch of butterflies... a great way for a sunrise contest,,, thanks and good luck,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2011 6:54:00 PM

Super imaginative Jack.. luv the Grim Reaper reference my friend.. good luck in the contest.. I am getting into writing shorter poems myself luv.. much said in few lines... awesome..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2011 4:48:00 PM

Not a morning person huh...Enjoyed reading this eve..Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by with a kind review..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/11/2011 1:24:00 PM

Good for her, Jack. Great little Tanka. Thank you for commenting. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/11/2011 11:39:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on Stifle, Jack. Your poem here takes on a whole new meaning now that I know what Beth had to say about Janie! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2011 5:54:00 PM

oooh, kind of eerie. Even the grim reaper does not want a grouch. haha. Or maybe just someone who refuses to be taken by surprise or to go without a fight! I liked it!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/10/2011 1:13:00 PM

Nice character sketch of Janie, jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2011 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for the note, Jack. I would love to meet Janie. Sounds like a feisty lady! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2011 10:00:00 AM

just wow, jack.. you took this on the highway! :) huggs, nette

Cory Long

Date: 5/10/2011 9:03:00 AM

this is good I like it nicely done.. cory

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2011 8:50:00 AM

Really like the way she scowls at the Grim Reaper and he "slinks" away. Very cool poem, Jack. If it is for the Sunrise contest, you have quite a creative and unique entry. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn