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Dawn of a New Day

Languidly,opening my brown eyes,to see you, in my arms,so charmingly and blissfully asleep. Forgive me,but I ran my fingers across your nose, eyelids and lips and through your hair. So tempted was I to see all the rest of you. Sleeping so soundly and innocently bare! But I chose to relive our very first and dear meeting, in my flowing fields of amaranth memory. The decades have whisked away some of that godly, curly,Arcadian hair of yesterday. And strangely,I love you all the more! I still lay here,utterly entranced! By your angelic,Mount Olympus-blessed,countenance! All my love, Panagiota

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Date: 9/10/2019 7:25:00 AM
Such a light but loving write. "my flowing fields of amaranth memory."
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thanks for reading. It is one of my FAVs, some poem are alive to me. This is one of them.)) Hope your week is a humdinger. Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2019 5:22:00 PM
wow, Panagiota. THis one is exceptional from you. You are getting better and better. I love this endearing description of a loved one. Think I will fave it.
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I don't think I'm getting better)) Several of my past poems, I humbly consider outstanding... But... Can see why you love it. And I appreciate your time...Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2019 3:35:00 PM
Wow...who that specimen be...the angelic hulk of Mount Olympus...I like it
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Date: 9/9/2019 3:47:00 PM
Mmmm, Arturo! He is the heartsong of my days and nights. Better stop here or another poem wll be called for. Mmmm Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2019 12:00:00 PM
Your first verse is a winner all by its lonesome! Aloha! Rico
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/9/2019 12:25:00 PM
Hello Rico! I do agree with you heartily on the first verse.))) thank you so much. Love, Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2019 9:03:00 AM
Well expressed Pani...all our love too my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 9/9/2019 12:11:00 PM
^WW^ Thank you for commenting! Yout love is greatly accepted. Love, Pani
Date: 9/9/2019 3:42:00 AM
An adoring meaningful beautiful love poem no song represents the pure beauty episode on heart masterfully done lovingly penned Panagiota Be at peace ...James
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Date: 9/9/2019 12:08:00 PM
You got that exactly as I hoped it would be. Oh, and what a comment! Wow.I wish I coluld FAV some of my own. This is one of them. One day, I will go over all my poems...some I dearly love. Love, Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2019 3:00:00 AM
Ohhhh... so utterly, beautifully, romantic Panagiota your deep love shines out from every word - Gorgeous!!! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/9/2019 12:02:00 PM
Greetings, dearest Ann! I am glad to know I got my point across Love,, Panagiota

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