Dawn Delight

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dawn's scarlet sunrise glimmering glorious glow temple bells chimed January 17, 2022 "Nature Haiku With Alliteration" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com A Strand - 1060 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/28/2022 7:39:00 PM

A glorious haiku, Mala. The celebratory bells at sunrise is the perfect conclusion to your haiku. Best wishes, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/28/2022 1:05:00 AM

Very picturesque haiku. Congratulations! I will be going through the other translations of yours soon. I like reading them.

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2022 8:37:00 PM

The image and the description together have created in me the feeling of having watched a glorious sunrise. Great Haiku , Malabika !

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/18/2022 9:52:00 AM

Watching a scarlet sunrise always is a pleasure and the wings of hope flutters on its sight...Another well crafted Haiku my friend...I think, this is the third Haiku of yours in a series that I am reading today...haha...Hugs...~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 6:06:00 PM

Thanks, Anitha. Wow! You read three of my haikus! Appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2022 7:03:00 AM

- Beautiful, Mala ... made me think of your photos I saw last night - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 6:04:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Really appreciate your support.