Dawn Break

birds’ chirps awaken breaking the dawn’s blest silence sunshine sits on end praising God’s rich morning grace new day’s surprises amaze Nov. 8, 2022 11.17am Howmanysyllable.com 5-7-5-7-7 21 words 31 syllables 143 characters A NEW HIKU FOOTLE TANKA Contest Judged: 11/8/2022 12:32:00 PM Sponsored by: Brian Strand Place: HM (4 first 6 thirds and 19HMs)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2022 3:44:00 PM

sweet new born day image , Len

Len Gasun
Date: 11/15/2022 4:08:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and kind words my dear friend Andrea. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/10/2022 6:52:00 AM

Nice one my friend Len. Congratulations your win! :)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/13/2022 1:45:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Linda for your visit, uplifting comment and your congratulatory greetings. God bless. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2022 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Great that you wrote a faith-based work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 11/13/2022 1:44:00 AM

You're welcome and I thank you more my dear friend Sara. Thank you so much for your uplifting comment and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you . Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 11/9/2022 8:23:00 AM

The new day morn appears so blessed and beautiful with sunshine and bird song. A Happy opening to a fresh day. Beautiful tanka, dear Len. Congratulations on your win.

Len Gasun
Date: 11/13/2022 1:42:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend Valsa for another visit, uplifting comments and congratulatory comments. God bless you! Hugs.