Len Gasun Poet Tanka

Dawn Break

birds’ chirps awaken
breaking the dawn’s blest silence
sunshine sits on end
praising God’s rich morning grace
new day’s surprises amaze

Nov. 8, 2022     11.17am



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A NEW HIKU FOOTLE TANKA
Contest Judged:  11/8/2022 12:32:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Place: HM (4 first 6 thirds and 19HMs)

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Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2022 at 3:44 PM sweet new born day image , Len Len Gasun November 15, 2022 at 4:08 PM Thank you so much for your visit and kind words my dear friend Andrea. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler November 10, 2022 at 6:52 AM Nice one my friend Len. Congratulations your win! :) Len Gasun November 13, 2022 at 1:45 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Linda for your visit, uplifting comment and your congratulatory greetings. God bless. Hugs

Sara Kendrick November 9, 2022 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Great that you wrote a faith-based work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Len Gasun November 13, 2022 at 1:44 AM You're welcome and I thank you more my dear friend Sara. Thank you so much for your uplifting comment and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you . Hugs

Valsa George November 9, 2022 at 8:23 AM The new day morn appears so blessed and beautiful with sunshine and bird song. A Happy opening to a fresh day. Beautiful tanka, dear Len. Congratulations on your win. Len Gasun November 13, 2022 at 1:42 AM Thank you my dear friend Valsa for another visit, uplifting comments and congratulatory comments. God bless you! Hugs.