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Dawn Awakens

Dawn awakens, senses heighten Orange sherbet streaks brilliant Underpin clouds your eyes taste Alight on your tongue ere they fade

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Date: 3/11/2020 12:07:00 PM
'your eyes taste' - how evocative, your pen is alive and kicking here, gw!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2020 8:42:00 PM
Thanks for the nice compliment, Michelle! ~ Gershon
Date: 3/9/2020 4:13:00 PM
"orange sherbet streaks" - I wish I had thought of that for it is perfect.
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Date: 3/9/2020 10:07:00 PM
The thought is the father of the eat! :) gw
Date: 3/8/2020 8:11:00 PM
I love orange sherbert must have been a rrrrrough one lol. Well done
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2020 3:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kelli! Cheers, Gershon

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