Dawn Awakens

Dawn awakens, senses heighten
Orange sherbet streaks brilliant
Underpin clouds your eyes taste
Alight on your tongue ere they fade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Faulkner Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 12:07 PM
'your eyes taste' - how evocative, your pen is alive and kicking here, gw!
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Thanks for the nice compliment, Michelle! ~ Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:13 PM
"orange sherbet streaks" - I wish I had thought of that for it is perfect.
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 10:07 PM
The thought is the father of the eat! :) gw
White Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 8:11 PM
I love orange sherbert must have been a rrrrrough one lol. Well done
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 3:39 PM
Thank you so much, Kelli! Cheers, Gershon
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