hiku - dawn after dormancy

winter's dormancy pastel dawn painted upon ~ spring's renewed canvas

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:36:00 PM

Very nice! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 10:23:00 PM

More congrats to you, Sara

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:32:00 AM

Thank you again. I appreciate it.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/23/2025 11:39:00 AM

Sara, a beautiful haiku, congratulations on your winning placement.

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:32:00 AM

Thank you for placing me in your contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2025 8:19:00 AM

One of my favorites on this list. Congrats on your win

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:31:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2025 5:48:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Sara :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:31:00 AM

Thank you so much. Have an amazing weekend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2025 5:03:00 PM

Likean etch a sketch and yet not erased but rather alive! Hugs

Sara Jama
Date: 5/13/2025 5:26:00 PM

Thank you so much.