Dawn

A sunbather out on the lawn Garnered staring but never a yawn For one glance at her back Showed a thong sitting smack On the very exposed crack of Dawn.

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Pat Adams

Date: 11/7/2017 6:20:00 PM

Ha! Ok so you commented on one of my poems, so I decided to check out yours. This was the 1st one. Out of literally hundreds! I was completely blind sided! I love this poem and I have a lot of rummaging to do I see. A FAV 4 me.....80)...Pat

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/14/2017 1:18:00 AM

it is true that it is darkest before dawn, so you need anti-sunscreen.... cute..

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/11/2017 11:34:00 PM

Ha ha ha ha ha. :):):) Too clever. Thanks for the guggle. That's not a typo by the way. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2017 9:44:00 PM

hahaha, SO good this is. LOVE it, Ilene.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/10/2017 4:10:00 PM

Hahaha! Great last line, Ilene! My poem about Business 101 is true, though I almost felt even then she was a flirt. Later she reminded me of a brunette Betty White! But you'd have had to see her deadbeat husband who also taught at the same school. / M