Debbie Duncan Poet Dramatic Verse

Dawn

There was truth.
As I watched you there.
In the comfort of strangers.
Except they were not strangers.
Like a dream within a dream.
You felt yourself sinking within the fire.
One life of many, you played in all life.
Do you even have a soul to be saved?
I watch you dance around the fire.
I see your skirt has caught fire.
As you swim among the angels light.
I see some truth within your light.
Though you live beyond the edge of night.
Waiting there for your prince to come.
Dancing on the edge of time.
Dancing closer to the fire.
Giants of old have come crashing down.
The end is coming soon, hear the trumpets sound.
Waiting for the dawn to come back around.

Wed 9am   8/ 28/ 2013

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Shadow Hamilton May 28, 2014 at 8:52 AM a thrilling poem Debbie superbly penned hugs

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2014 at 4:22 PM Debbie, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

Karen Anglesey September 30, 2013 at 5:05 PM I was captivated by the mystical quality in this. Seems to be an eerie sense of conflict within the self in this one. How will we be judged in the final hour?

Cherl Dunn September 16, 2013 at 6:05 PM This is sad but well written I am part native american and we believe that the end will being a new age of mankind an age of enlightenment and hope. thank you for your comments on my work friend.

Duncan Chappell September 15, 2013 at 1:16 AM love it ,nothing more to say master in all xxxx duncan Debbie Duncan September 15, 2013 at 1:42 AM Thank you ;}

Duke Beaufort September 7, 2013 at 8:10 AM Also the top of your head is red--kind of like the sun coming up after an all night party to light things up. You are sunshine! I had to say it. Debbie Duncan September 7, 2013 at 2:22 PM thank you Duke ;}

Duke Beaufort September 7, 2013 at 8:08 AM Debbie, you definitely have a style all your own. It's very enjoyable to read and let the words create an image in my mind. On its face, this is about the end of night. And this happens over and over. I have never thought of anything quite like this and it is a charming insight into the way you view the world. It is complex and mystifying I do admit. You have something very special. Thank-you for all your comments. It means a lot to me. Debbie Duncan September 7, 2013 at 8:54 AM I haven't seen you for a while,, thank you for reading , as always ;}

Lucilla Carrillo September 6, 2013 at 1:21 PM Hi Debbie; I like your poem. It reminds me of something I saw on the news the other night. Somewhere I think was in Peru that people are hearing some strange sounds - like trumpets are being played and we could hear them, but no one know where the sound is coming from. They think it could be the Angels already playing the trumpets. thanks for sharing... Lucilla Debbie Duncan September 7, 2013 at 9:24 AM Thank you Lucilla ,,,, I heard/ read on u tube. the first trumpet sounded in 2008 ;}

Robert Johnson September 4, 2013 at 4:12 PM A reflective essence upon itself. Awaiting to be taken down off it's shelf. A wonderful dance into the night Debbie. Peace. :)

Carol Eastman September 4, 2013 at 10:09 AM Great imagery. Your pieces always make us stop and think. Debbie Duncan September 4, 2013 at 10:33 PM Thank you Carol ;}

Terry O'Leary September 1, 2013 at 11:59 AM Nice imagery, Debbie...love it... Terry Debbie Duncan September 1, 2013 at 1:46 PM Thank you Terry ;}

Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 5:50 PM Nicely done Debbie. The ending is good. Debbie Duncan September 1, 2013 at 10:56 PM Thank you ;}

Jack Horne August 30, 2013 at 9:41 AM wow, awesome write, Debbie Debbie Duncan September 1, 2013 at 1:46 PM Thank you Jack ;}

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2013 at 9:30 AM Indeed it is dramatic and spiritual as well. Very nicely done, Debbie. Debbie Duncan September 7, 2013 at 2:21 PM Thank you Andrea ;}

Ken Carroll August 29, 2013 at 10:24 PM Hi Debbie, A well crafted spiritual write...Thanks for sharing.. Ken Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 10:28 PM Thank you Ken ;}

Don Johnson August 29, 2013 at 8:18 PM yes waiting for the end to come, the lord of hosts returns for some, fulfil the prophesy, its about, return he will there is no doubt, Apocalypse thou ... Don re : "Dawn" Debbie Duncan

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2013 at 6:47 PM Very expressive and creative work that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visit to my work..I am glad that you liked the song that I suggested..Sara

Jack Ellison August 29, 2013 at 6:15 PM Great ending kiddo! A totally amazing effort... big warm hugs xoxox Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 6:34 PM Thank you Jack

Poet Tacito August 29, 2013 at 8:46 AM HIghly intense & hard hitting! The horn of judgment sounds strongly. Fantastic. Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 5:01 PM I thank you Drake ;}

Monterey Sirak August 29, 2013 at 7:02 AM Amazing poem! Thanks for your visit and comments Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 5:31 PM Thank you ;}

Eileen Manassian August 29, 2013 at 6:16 AM Very sweet, Debbie...The ending was amazing! :) One of those times when you think, "I wish I could get into her mind and know what inspired this one!" ;) Thanks for your visits to my work! Hugs! Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 11:06 PM Thank you Eileen ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2013 at 2:41 AM - Oh .... beautiful poem,Debbie. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 11:06 PM Thank you Anne ;}

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 29, 2013 at 1:19 AM Fine rhymin there! A superb poem of imagination. Pls do chk out my latest. Debbie Duncan August 29, 2013 at 9:57 PM Thank you for reading ;}