Dawn

The world is still
all is quiet
colorful clouds 
linger before the sun
a pink hazy light
is cast upon all that
can be seen
rain falls softly
light, clean, pure
in this place
nothing moves or changes
nothing lives or dies
everything is it's own existance
this is where you'll find me
in this hidden world
neither a dream or reality...

By Morgan Mise
Written December 30, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 8, 2013 at 7:49 PM
Lovely expression of a time of day I rarely get to see, the surrealisitic atmosphere of the moment is captured eloquently in your free verse style. At times, it surely feels as if time stands still, doesn't it? Thanks for your comment on my work Curt
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January 8, 2013 at 7:53 PM
Thank you very much. I just write what comes to me.. It sure does. And no problem, it was wonderful. :) Morgan
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