Dawn

Rimmed with red,
the sky emerges
from an alcoholic haze,
collapses on the shoulder of a hill.

As thin-lipped
as the letter box,
I brush a broken bottle
from the driveway:

shards of glass
that tinkle on the tarmac,
sharp as laughter
in an empty room.


First published in Bravado, New Zealand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Mcintosh Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 6:11 AM
Enjoyed God bless you love. Gina
Ireland Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Thank you. For the record: I don't drink!
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