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Dawn

Written: November 09, 2023, For Andrea Dietrich
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Dawn
rays weave
amid clouds
each November,
dead twigs were drifting
oak trees, red-brown
beech, light tan
carved at
dawn.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 6:04:00 AM

Back with congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/25/2023 2:37:00 PM

What a gorgeous poem so well-complemented by the accompanying picture. Congratulations Las! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 8:29:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Dawn" Ninette write again. You always have wonderful pictures. I have not learned this yet... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:37:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Sotto.congrats and thanks for entering my contest

Paige Hind

Date: 11/12/2023 1:44:00 PM

Gorgeous picture, image and written picture! Loved and enjoyed reading it!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/10/2023 9:43:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning! I did dawn and dusk for my ninette. I really love the imagery and flow of your descriptive wordplay in this stunning take. Especially love how you’ve written “ rays weave amid clouds” and “ dead twigs were drifting oak trees” ah such creative and artistic lines. That fits the november theme so eloquently! I absolutely loved reading this. In a short form in few syllables you’ve delivered a brilliant poem, im surely will score high. Goodluck for the contest dear Sotto

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/10/2023 9:29:00 AM

As autumn closes, you bear witness by shared insights, Lasaad. Most of our islands are not privy to such scenes, particularly, Hilo, being on the windward (wettest) side of our island. Waterfalls, rivers and beaches, water everywhere, and thick green forest hugging our mountainsides to the seashore. Our colorful changing autumn is seen on TV. Cheers, my friend. Aloha, William

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/10/2023 8:49:00 AM

Such a delightful Ninette Sotto. A stunning poem with a stunning picture to accompany it. Such exquisite imagery for the month of November. Really enjoyed it. Good luck with the contest. Blessings to you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2023 7:17:00 AM

Wonderful imagery of dawn in November. Nicely done, my friend.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 5:57:00 PM

Lovely imagery in your Ninette, My dear friend. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest! Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2023 2:33:00 PM

Great snapshot from which to spring your work. I enjoyed reading your Ninette. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/9/2023 1:25:00 PM

Your "Dawn" is a wonderful Ninette write/pretty picture. Good Luck. I also did this one... Have a great fall day writing away............