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Dawn

Sunrise
Morning dawning
Early sunbeams warming
Another glorious day breaks
Daylight

23/2/20

morningsunshinecinquain

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Bette Bavington

February 29, 2020 at 5:47 PM

A beautiful sun rise with lovely imagery. To see this in the morning is to know that God exist.

Paul Callus

February 29, 2020 at 2:30 PM

Your beautiful Cinquain more than captures my attention, Jan...so does the accompanying visual. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

February 29, 2020 at 12:08 AM

Lovely, Jan.

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2020 at 10:00 AM

Good idea for this winner. Congrats . Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 25, 2020 at 1:24 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

February 24, 2020 at 11:46 AM

A perfect cinquain Jan. You understand the form and it shows brilliantly! xxoo

Jenish Somadas

February 23, 2020 at 10:53 PM

Beautiful imagery.. Congrats on your great win Jan..

Susan Ashley

February 23, 2020 at 10:51 PM

You've captured the optimistic beauty of a new young day perfectly, Jan. A gorgeous poem and a stunning pic too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

February 23, 2020 at 7:24 PM

Sweet! I’ll take it!

Gershon Wolf

February 23, 2020 at 6:06 PM

Picture-perfect, Jan! Smiles, Gershon

Charlie Smith

February 23, 2020 at 5:58 PM

I love your optimism Jan...

Lindsay Laurie

February 23, 2020 at 5:46 PM

Hello Jan … reminds me of my outback camping days. Dawn and bird song is so relaxing - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison

February 23, 2020 at 5:54 PM

Thanks Lindsay its a gorgeous time of the day!:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

February 23, 2020 at 4:04 PM

No better time of day Jan, have seen some beauties in my time. Hope you're on the mend. Tom

Jan Allison

February 23, 2020 at 4:07 PM

We have taken some breathtaking photos Tom, Am struggling a bit but feel so much better than yesterday:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

February 23, 2020 at 3:26 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. Eve

Jan Allison

February 23, 2020 at 4:06 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 23, 2020 at 2:23 PM

- A glorious poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

February 23, 2020 at 2:33 PM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

February 23, 2020 at 1:05 PM

I cannot let my last day on PS go by without commenting on this beauty. Jan, it's just beautiful, and a good choice on the photo to accompany it. Cheers to you.

Jan Allison

February 23, 2020 at 1:09 PM

Thanks Lin I appreciate your thoughtfulness in taking time to comment:-) hugs jan xx