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Sunrise Morning dawning Early sunbeams warming Another glorious day breaks Daylight 23/2/20

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Bette Bavington

Date: 2/29/2020 5:47:00 PM

A beautiful sun rise with lovely imagery. To see this in the morning is to know that God exist.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/29/2020 2:30:00 PM

Your beautiful Cinquain more than captures my attention, Jan...so does the accompanying visual. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/29/2020 12:08:00 AM

Lovely, Jan.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2020 10:00:00 AM

Good idea for this winner. Congrats . Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2020 1:24:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/24/2020 11:46:00 AM

A perfect cinquain Jan. You understand the form and it shows brilliantly! xxoo

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/23/2020 10:53:00 PM

Beautiful imagery.. Congrats on your great win Jan..

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2020 10:51:00 PM

You've captured the optimistic beauty of a new young day perfectly, Jan. A gorgeous poem and a stunning pic too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/23/2020 7:24:00 PM

Sweet! I’ll take it!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/23/2020 6:06:00 PM

Picture-perfect, Jan! Smiles, Gershon

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/23/2020 5:58:00 PM

I love your optimism Jan...

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/23/2020 5:46:00 PM

Hello Jan … reminds me of my outback camping days. Dawn and bird song is so relaxing - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay its a gorgeous time of the day!:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/23/2020 4:04:00 PM

No better time of day Jan, have seen some beauties in my time. Hope you're on the mend. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 4:07:00 PM

We have taken some breathtaking photos Tom, Am struggling a bit but feel so much better than yesterday:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2020 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 4:06:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2020 2:23:00 PM

- A glorious poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:33:00 PM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 2/23/2020 1:05:00 PM

I cannot let my last day on PS go by without commenting on this beauty. Jan, it's just beautiful, and a good choice on the photo to accompany it. Cheers to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 1:09:00 PM

Thanks Lin I appreciate your thoughtfulness in taking time to comment:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/23/2020 12:06:00 PM

This warms my heart, so optimistic, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 12:09:00 PM

Thanks Michelle I adore sunrise and sunset:-) hugs Jan xx