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Dawkins' Bicameral Blind

Excuse me, Mr. Dawkins,
one,
or maybe two,
addition(s),
if you please:

You say "we are survival mechanisms."
which of course who could live to dispute?
but
from looks of me and you
and human natures more generally,
and bicamerally,
we are also health-thrival-relational 
cooperative organisms
before we could ever get to all that
struggling with survivolution.

You call us, "Robot machines,
blindly programmed to preserve
the selfish molecules known as genes."
To which I heartily add my 

Not so blindly 
organically, interdependently programmed
for/of bicamerally ego/ecoconscious 
cooperative win/win thrival

Bilateral co-empathic
intelligent health regenesis,
PolyCultural Design for 0-InteriorSoul
with interdependent health intent
in/exformed by +/-1 ExteriorZone 
wealthy win/win resonance
v. pathological win/lose 0-sum chaotic
rabid anger/fear
narcissistic/paranoid 
NotThisEgo/NotThatEco
co-dependent not-healthy/not-safe
disempowering dissonance

Trauma triggering
mere survival
robotic machinations.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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