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Dawg-Gone It Nursery Rhyme

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The man in the moon Was smiling at noon When he heard Mr. Fox Playing his cello On a late day in June He was playing a tune To the likes of Mrs. Pig And her fellow Mr. Cow came along And he sang to the song That the Chicken and Hen Started dancing to But it wasn't too long Before something went wrong Oh No! Mr. Dog got hit with Mrs. Birds... poo-poo ((yikes)) Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper 2/21/2023

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Date: 4/16/2023 3:17:00 PM
A wonderfully rhythmic poem for children to dance to & for them to act out. YUMMY. It is funny, cute and delightful.
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Date: 3/12/2023 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write/picture. Great ending. (poo-poo is not fun) Have a blessed day/week...............
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Date: 3/4/2023 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Charles. Wonderful Nursery Rhyme. I am still getting that book ready.. Sorry it's been taking so long. Eve.
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Date: 3/4/2023 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner in Eve's contest. Creative lines penned. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:29:00 PM
Charlie I chuckled so hard at this one. I actually read it to a couple of my friends kids that I was watching last weekend and they laughed too! Really really good man! A.S.
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:21:00 PM
Back with Congrats Charlie. Kids will love the "naughtiness" of this one ! Well done.
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:50:00 PM
Did I tell you I like this Nursery Rhyme? You have soup Mail. Cheers
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Date: 2/23/2023 4:26:00 PM
OMG, this is one the best one. It got me laugh a good one, Charlie. I love it!
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Date: 2/23/2023 11:32:00 AM
Farm animal high jinks humor! Terrific! Isn't there always a little something to spoil a gathering? Best wishes, Brian
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/23/2023 12:11:00 PM
LOL- Right! Thanks Brian.. Always a pleasure to hear from you. :)
Date: 2/22/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for the laugh. Great nursery rhyme.
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/23/2023 12:12:00 PM
Always a pleasue, Victor. Thank you!
Date: 2/21/2023 10:41:00 PM
Finally I can get in to comment ! Best Nursery Rhyme I have ever read. Beats Humpty Dumpty hands down. Well done Charlie
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/22/2023 3:35:00 AM
Wow! Wendy, you sure know how to make a fellow feel good :) Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. (Soupmail) Hugs Charlie

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