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David and Goliath

Have you met Goliath Grouper bigger than the huge state trooper around when you were flying low? That ticket cost you lots of dough. In duel with fish of such a size, he’d be the winner, you the prize. Though mostly calm and quite benign, you do not want one on your line. Take warning divers, stay away, don’t be a part of his buffet like other big fish in the sea. He'll think you are a delicacy. For Carolyn's "Attack" contest a first with this

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Date: 6/6/2011 6:03:00 AM
Many Congrats Joyce on your fantastic win in this contest of Carolyn with this fabulous write..love, gautami
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:19:00 AM
Joyce, great to see you in the top spot. Congratulations on your honored placement Souper! Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/4/2011 3:10:00 PM
Many congrats Joyce on your fine win in Carolyn's contest with this funny poem. Have a lovely evening....:)
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:05:00 PM
Great news Joyce, best wishes on the win in Carolyns contest!
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:11:00 AM
Giggle..good one...congrats on your big win.BG
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:12:00 PM
LOL, Congratulations on all your wins, Joyce: )
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine piece, Joyce. You've got the gift. :))
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:35:00 PM
great take on the contest with your poem, Joyce. Congratulations on your top winning entry
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Very creative work..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest Joyce. Love Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:16:00 PM
LOL So funny, Joyce! Grouper don't eat people, but the captain said if I were underwater holding a fish by the tail, a Goliath Grouper might take off my arm. Congratulations on your first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:31:00 PM
Wow! That flowed very nicely and was enjoyable to read.
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Date: 5/23/2011 6:25:00 PM
Ha! I enjoyed this one. Great take on Carolynn's contest. Good luck and thank you for your review:) Matt
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