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Daughters

Moon lit skys And ferris wheel rides This was the time of her life Just a little girl With a cute smile that glowed like pearl With waves of blonde hair that loved to curl Again, agian, she would plead To ride upon her minuter stead Around in a circle the man would lead Every year it was the same Until time would be ashamed And all to blame Now she looks at her little girl Who has that same smile of pearl With her hair that stays curled Its off to the races And all the long lost faces As she ties her little girls shoe laces She smiled so brilliant But some how redundant She remembered Those moonlit skys And hidden alibis And the time of her life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/26/2008 12:59:00 PM
sometimes the best times we had were as kids, good memories, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/12/2008 7:44:00 AM
This is a great write very passionate and full of detail its a brillant poem, Foy
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Date: 8/12/2008 5:39:00 AM
Oh so beautiful. Memories of your daughter captured so well. Time is so fleeting. The cycle continues. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/12/2008 1:05:00 AM
You have truly captured the essence of a child here - As my younger daughter grows I try so hard to be a positive part of her life and it feels great - I sure had a template of what not to do because I failed my other children drastically - I totally enjoyed your wonderful poem - God Bless
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