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Daughter of Flame

The fabric of temperate night unravels, Embellishing August her red gown Through heaven’s lease… this daughter of flame Spreads buds, their complexion pure as dew. And mornings welcome sunlight , gold as her locks, While this maiden romps along untrimmed fields That She , in possession of eternal wantonness grant An explosion of wildflowers crowing her limbs: By the meadow’s shade, heated breeze changes into fog To augur Fall’s tender arrival— Making a warm queenly exit, she leaves with a dulcet kiss. ……………….. 8/16/2019 A Summer Day Redo: Michelle Faulkner’s Contest
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 5:54 PM
I love your beautiful imagery in this entry Nette. Congratulations on your deserving win! ; ) xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 12:14 AM
Hi Nette, a great write and depth that is subtle yet powerful - I love it - congratulations. Hugs, Jenns.
Faulkner Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:15 PM
A stirring tribute to nature, nette, thanks for entering my contest!
Onat Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 12:57 PM
This captivating poem flames and so does summer. Love the dulcet kiss!
Marty Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 12:30 PM
If she were a lady, men would chase her! Finely crafted!
Mchattie Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 8:21 PM
No no no. Summer must not end. Keep fall far far away. Wonderful poem. Great imagery. Have a good day my friend.
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:56 PM
one word ... WOW:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Enjoyed this beauty of a summer's day..you incorporated the given words flawlessly..great imagery in your personification, Nette..well written, as always.
Parker Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Beautiful dear poet, you have reminded us Autumn is closing in...good luck with the contest
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