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Date Gradient Variable

In the middle of the first date, a troubling thought progression occurs: The computer in me calculates success probability of insertion of tongue in cheek at point zero three Something in the conversation has gotta change this imminent failure trajectory Input date gradient variable: Nerd ... inverse chemical personality change Buddy Love ... alter ego accessing Cool romanticism vectoring Body red alert! Eye contact avoidance creating critical mass passion implosion Rupturing of the mellow ambient mood will occur in ten nanoseconds delta wave oscillation Dream date bubble burst will ensue Unanticipated motor response must commence Hip central cortex command — Wallflower boy get off the fence ... kiss that woman, and pierce that emotional force field erected around the heart-shaped valence Update voluntary co-joined gradient variable: Buddy Love is now in physical operational control

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/9/2017 6:35:00 PM
Hey Freddie how's you? Your poem is fascinating, you are just super amazing!!! Hugs :)
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Date: 11/9/2017 1:16:00 PM
Wow...Sounds electronic...Fascinating poetry...All the best to you Freddie
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:05:00 AM
Ty, everyone for your kind and gracious comments. I was just channeling my inner Stephon Ur-kel cool alter ego. Buddy Love's little nephew. Steve Urkel ... "Family Matters." Buddy Love ... "The Nutty Professor." Two of my cathode tube favorites. Love and smiles to everyone. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 11/9/2017 8:42:00 AM
You pen bleeds so many different types of poetry.. it seems to flow so smoothly for you.. A true gift..
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:21:00 AM
Freddie , I think you are amazing with how you put your imagination to work with such creative writing and amazing lines. Well done :)
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:09:00 AM
You wrote this well Freddie--emotions and trepidation surrounding first date ring true through some heavy words!
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:01:00 AM
Oh, Annieve and Kim, you both made me chuckle hardy this morning w/your delightful and insightful comments. I was in a playful mood early this morning ... and I challenged myself to write a poem about a nerdy guy on a first date that appears to him to be flaming out. So, he thinks like a scientist, and this is how he sees the date going. Lol. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 11/9/2017 5:28:00 AM
Love this Freddie! I caught the Buddy Love reference! Too cute...the scientist using the numbers to see how well the date is going. Blessings, my friend!
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