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Dash's Flames and Fire

I stand alone so far away, waiting for the day to stay. I bring my hand forward my hand a blaze, watching the fade of day. "Where is he?" I ask, for my true love a task. "Dash!" He calls, I rush to him without a doubt. My flames twirl around us, with every sweet kiss that bounds us. I love my flames and fire.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 12:47:00 AM

nice to read this one again, Maia...LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/8/2015 12:54:00 AM

:) SK

Skat A

Date: 3/9/2014 11:46:00 PM

I love the title, Maia , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2014 8:28:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Maia :) - I choose your first beautiful written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2014 8:12:00 AM

Maia, ha, I love how you took him into your world. amazing first post. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and offer positive feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to getting to know you and your poetry :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jesu Johnson

Date: 3/8/2014 6:05:00 PM

WOW!!!! How passionate !!!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2014 5:40:00 PM

very romantic and warm // paul