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Daryush-Once In a While

Just for a moment,wait hesitate and dream and receive Step outside the box imagination cries to be freed, Unshackled ,awaken conception's can-do, make believe; Experiment and try the novel ,unique in you,lie, Just for a moment,don't hesitate ,let it formulate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/5/2010 11:21:00 AM
Thankxxx Brian for choosing my poem Priorities for your 3rd place winner .. I loved writing this poem for the contest .. and am happy to see it chosen for such a high placement.. thankxxx for appreciating my poetry Brian.. as I always have and do your tremendous writes... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/5/2010 8:54:00 AM
Good one, Brian! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/5/2010 2:43:00 AM
Well....some have ADHD you know...Keep the creative pen flowing. Great write. Sara
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Date: 3/4/2010 8:57:00 AM
And once in a while it happens just like u have written.. the formula appears and the rush to pen and paper.. I do like this setup Brian.. I luv punctuation.. that show emphasis like this one.. going to my favs...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:39:00 AM
Wonderful poem, enjoyed reading this morning..
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Date: 3/4/2010 5:32:00 AM
Hi Brian, totally agree with Nathan......an inspiration as always.....Allie
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