Barbara Gorelick Poet Alliteration

Darned Drive-In

Busty Betty beguiled the besotted boys
Painfully plain Polly puzzled over her plight
Dapper Dan discovered the delights of drive-ins
Blushing busty Betty before long began to bulge 
Polly perceived  her problem and preceded
To point the poor papa and his problem to the priest

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Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2011 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Barbara

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2011 at 11:38 PM soo cute...things do happen a lot in a drive-in, barbara...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2011 at 7:47 PM Big tattle tale...Congrats on your win..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 12, 2011 at 6:21 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!!-------Lori

John Freeman September 12, 2011 at 1:33 PM Barbara, Thanks for the honor of reading your "Darned Drive-In ", I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses

Kim Merryman September 12, 2011 at 12:31 PM Enjoyed this! Congrats on your win, Barbara! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 8:39 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 4:07 AM hey Barbara congrats on your win, loved it..David

Joyce Johnson September 12, 2011 at 1:41 AM Great work Barbara. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 12, 2011 at 1:17 AM Congrats BG on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry luv..

Caryl Ramsdale September 12, 2011 at 12:31 AM A 3rd place congratulations Barbara for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire September 11, 2011 at 11:12 PM My Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR win in Moses' " Contest "Alliteration POEMS Please" Quite Clever I thought YOU said YOU were not in the Mood to Write This is Superb With LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS...Harry

Gwendolen Song September 9, 2011 at 2:04 AM This is why a DANGER SIGN needs to be on all drive in admission tickets. ha ha. Barbara..just pure fun. Great alliteration...fun entry. Mine,..a lil serious. Best to u, Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2011 at 10:49 PM hahaha, I had to think a bit and then it hit me. VERY good!!!