Darn Insects Attack

grasses waft april fragrance as lady sips melon day bold ninja insects invade ...repellant she squirts flying needles wage buzzed attack rams garden, zooming high speed darn choppers of mosquitoes... prick Nancy's behind! Make Me Laugh, New Contest
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A   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:36 PM
:) Congratulations on your fine win in Nancy's contest.. take care *LINDA
Morgan Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 8:31 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 5:07 PM
congrats on your win..Sara
Hendricks Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 2:44 PM
hahaha. A well-deserved first placement, Nette. Congratulations!! Licia :-)
Macfarlane Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Ninja mosquitoes,,,LOL,,,,Nancy should have sprayed her behind...this was a riot! Well done Nette. Hugs
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 8:13 AM
you have some beautifully penned lines in this humorous poem...congrats on your well deserved win! hugs
Hamilton Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 7:34 AM
so funny Nette big congrats on winning Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:19 PM
hahaha, you used her name in it. Way to do the contest, Nette. Congrats on your big win.
Jones Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Well, you made me belly laugh!! Awesome poem, as usual, you blow me away! Peace, sister, and namaste. ~N
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Phookan Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 3:34 AM
Loved 'grasses waft april fragrance' and many more,, like legion of mosquitoes too, that makes it real witty. Congrats nette on your awesome win.. have a wonderful sunday!! love you...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 1:49 AM
Congratulations on your super win nette xx
A   Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 11:12 PM
Nette, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 10:48 PM
My favorite of the entries. Congrats on your first place win!! Blessings, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 8:44 PM
Yours was so inventive, Nette. Congrats.
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 8:40 PM
lGood job Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Song Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 8:31 PM
A super poetic scene, Nette! I will always think of moSquitoes as choppers from now forward! HA HA cONGRATS TO YOU! lOVE, GWENDOLEN
Burch Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Congratulations Nette!! on your win!! Well done! big hugs,love deb
Sweetheart Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 7:22 PM
congrats Nedtte luv on first place win for this super duper entry luv..
K. Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 12:38 PM
AAck! Poor Yas :( ...That is just frustrating sometimes, the relentless mosquitoes and mangagat pa sa paa! Ang Kati!!! :D -- very descriptive dodoitsu, nette :) thanks for your inspiring comments :D hugs
Song Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 9:40 AM
I feel like I am in 2 places at once, Nette...a relaxing hammock then turned to a battle scene with choppers upon choppers of darting mosqitoes...hammocks squirting lemonade and ninja insects are great descriptors...Much enjoyed..Hope Yas is not allergic to mosquitoes...Ugh...Top write here! :) Gwendolen
A   Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Ha ha ..love this... and Nette, i give you permission, to join any poem you like...just no bunny poems...lol.. xoxo..pd
Sivey Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Yes, This is such a wonderful poem my friend! I just love how you put together the lines, "...bold ninja insects invade, swarming cozy day" these insects really do come in unannounced and bite big time! Thank you for sharing this write with us all! I really appreciate your poetry and enjoy reading it at all time! I just love your poem a lot Nette! Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 7:04 PM
VERY clever. love it. and yasmin deserves a big sting of love, she is pure delight.
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Mosquitoes are not good company...Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winning entry..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you got a chuckle when reading my poem about Down In The Boondocks..Sara
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