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Darn Insects Attack

grasses waft april fragrance as lady sips melon day bold ninja insects invade ...repellant she squirts flying needles wage buzzed attack rams garden, zooming high speed darn choppers of mosquitoes... prick Nancy's behind! Make Me Laugh, New Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 7:36:00 PM

:) Congratulations on your fine win in Nancy's contest.. take care *LINDA

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/19/2013 8:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2013 5:07:00 PM

congrats on your win..Sara

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/19/2013 2:44:00 PM

hahaha. A well-deserved first placement, Nette. Congratulations!! Licia :-)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/19/2013 10:36:00 AM

Ninja mosquitoes,,,LOL,,,,Nancy should have sprayed her behind...this was a riot! Well done Nette. Hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/19/2013 8:13:00 AM

you have some beautifully penned lines in this humorous poem...congrats on your well deserved win! hugs

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/19/2013 7:34:00 AM

so funny Nette big congrats on winning Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2013 10:19:00 PM

hahaha, you used her name in it. Way to do the contest, Nette. Congrats on your big win.

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/18/2013 9:39:00 PM

Well, you made me belly laugh!! Awesome poem, as usual, you blow me away! Peace, sister, and namaste. ~N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/15/2012 3:34:00 AM

Loved 'grasses waft april fragrance' and many more,, like legion of mosquitoes too, that makes it real witty. Congrats nette on your awesome win.. have a wonderful sunday!! love you...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 1:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win nette xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2012 11:12:00 PM

Nette, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/14/2012 10:48:00 PM

My favorite of the entries. Congrats on your first place win!! Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:44:00 PM

Yours was so inventive, Nette. Congrats.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/14/2012 8:40:00 PM

lGood job Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/14/2012 8:31:00 PM

A super poetic scene, Nette! I will always think of moSquitoes as choppers from now forward! HA HA cONGRATS TO YOU! lOVE, GWENDOLEN

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 7:52:00 PM

Congratulations Nette!! on your win!! Well done! big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 7:22:00 PM

congrats Nedtte luv on first place win for this super duper entry luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/11/2012 12:38:00 PM

AAck! Poor Yas :( ...That is just frustrating sometimes, the relentless mosquitoes and mangagat pa sa paa! Ang Kati!!! :D -- very descriptive dodoitsu, nette :) thanks for your inspiring comments :D hugs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/11/2012 9:40:00 AM

I feel like I am in 2 places at once, Nette...a relaxing hammock then turned to a battle scene with choppers upon choppers of darting mosqitoes...hammocks squirting lemonade and ninja insects are great descriptors...Much enjoyed..Hope Yas is not allergic to mosquitoes...Ugh...Top write here! :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2012 11:02:00 AM

Ha ha ..love this... and Nette, i give you permission, to join any poem you like...just no bunny poems...lol.. xoxo..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/8/2012 9:50:00 PM

Yes, This is such a wonderful poem my friend! I just love how you put together the lines, "...bold ninja insects invade, swarming cozy day" these insects really do come in unannounced and bite big time! Thank you for sharing this write with us all! I really appreciate your poetry and enjoy reading it at all time! I just love your poem a lot Nette! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2012 7:04:00 PM

VERY clever. love it. and yasmin deserves a big sting of love, she is pure delight.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2012 4:35:00 PM

Mosquitoes are not good company...Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winning entry..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you got a chuckle when reading my poem about Down In The Boondocks..Sara