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Darkness Slithers In-Senryu





              Darkness slithers in.
              Mysterious, under my skin.
              Cat, cuddles and grins.

        
                   

                        3/7/2021
                           ~3~

     
                    Rhymeed Senryu

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/8/2021 8:02:00 PM

This whisk-ers its way into my heart. Lovely senryu, my friend! Better than the 'cat's meow.' :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/9/2021 10:17:00 AM

You kill me with those clever responses, Gershon Thank you, hope you see my blog today for Lindley, Best from the West, Pangie

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/8/2021 5:04:00 PM

I agree with David-- 'tis good, very good. So few words yet so very much said! A fav.. God bless,

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/8/2021 6:03:00 PM

Hello, dear Robert. I am a woman of few words, indeed. My daughter and I were just speaking without you in high praise.))) Merci for visiting this humble poetess today and the fav! Blessings, Panagiota xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/8/2021 1:43:00 PM

Oh this is so good Pangie, did this actually happen observing the cat, the rhyme throughout the senryu makes it even better, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2021 9:26:00 PM

It’s that resident poltergeist on the soup, likes to play with our comments, or some software anomaly, wow 20 cats with 9 lives each, no wonder some of them smile, your quiet right to love this senryu, certainly a fave for me too, cheers David

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/8/2021 5:07:00 PM

Wow..I answered this and it disappeared? Anyway will try again. This is my 20th cat in a lifetime. Some do smile. It's really strange. Irene does not do it often..that night she did))) I, will admit to loving this Senryu unabashedly. I only learned these a few months ago....I answered a Senryu of yours...come back..Pangie ** and cat ^*^

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/8/2021 7:44:00 AM

Panagiota, Lovely, a Senryu with kind eyes and nine lives. -Richard

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/8/2021 10:55:00 AM

Your comments..so creative...amazing! * Panagiota*

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/8/2021 6:49:00 AM

Fabulous Pangie. :) Linda

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/8/2021 7:17:00 AM

Hey Linda! How are you? Thank you for saying so. *Pangie*

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2021 1:12:00 AM

That time of day to rest our weary heads and charge our batteries. Hope your weekend went well. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/8/2021 6:29:00 AM

Hi Tom...agree with all you said. Including charging iPad battery! Splendid time..I had. Maria really is good to me. Eddie got a small iPhone for HS. What a great school he will be attending! His elementary school, is in session. *Pangie*

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