Darkness Insight

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the truth how my soul sees without shadows to the point

Immoral codes of conduct displayed 
as the blind begin leading us 
haywire inside cover ups 
a spiral down 
lacking moral conscious 
burning democracies seal

Dressing up barbaric acts 
Coldly to suit arms astray 
two left feet without wings 
you will fall ill with agendas of greed.

Pure and simple facts 
power hungry nations are involved 
stealing lands filled with riches 
gas joker sinfully lusting blood drenched diamonds
gold filled with the burning desires of their pride 
consumed hateful anti matter spills out

Black oil means control and domination 
over energy and water a must to turn coils 
rewind around living waters 
our gift from heavens source
a basic right to existence

Now we who see the light 
know the truth so to speak honestly 
it has only one face open to suggestions 
Dirty secret societies exist elitists club members

Liars run for government's these days 
filled with falsehoods that has no valid grounds 
truly naked to fowl deeds exposed underhanded 
Deeper than ice we see cold darkness cuts 
in certain acts and deeds bared to the bone 

Those who purge this planet 
The frozen hearted beasts 
killing innocence of children 
they are unholy in God's light

This whole world in truth 
is running upside down with excuses 

I can see war looming close 
as the deceiver gains power 
over the peoples freedom chains exposed 
to choose correctly brainwashed slaves

For peace and goodness sake 
open your soul turn away from the fire 
before only ash remains smothered 
hope shines dressed in white
Darkness you cloud horizons sky 
mushrooms dawning light 
without mercy and dignity

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/7/2016 6:21:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad everyday.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!I wish you n' your very dear family all the best always.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^