Darkness Grows In the Garden of Pleasantries

DARKNESS GROWS IN THE GARDEN OF PLEASANTRIES Meandering through the garden of pleasantries, did you sense, the breathless pant of trees, or hear, the violin seduction, of Cupid’s sentries, or pierce the eyes, the blossom spread of luxuries? Do tell of sandals, chains and locks lost in shrubberies! O turtle doves, between your teeth, insolent mulberries. Too soon succumbed to satin skin, fracas of discoveries. The fruited-fountain of chocolate but noncommittal fudgeries.* The shrieking tomb of sirens — seagulls sic the maggoty melodies. The butterfly tresses of yesteryear sans curmudgeon cure of drudgeries. You thought to toss away her sensuous beauty, with exorbitant lies. No hope in her sea soaked eyes, salt preservative of glass flies. 4/14/2018
*fudgeries - fakes (made up word)
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Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 12:47 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful monorhyme. Enjoyed this.
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April 18, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thanks, Susan!
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April 18, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thanks, Susan!
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April 16, 2018 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your first place win. A great monorhyme.
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April 16, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
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April 15, 2018 at 10:05 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Kim. Well done.
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April 16, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Line!
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April 15, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Wonderful Monorhyme, Kim! Congrats on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations Kim, fudgeries, I like it.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Thanks, Tom! Just had to keep it! :)
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April 15, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Congrats Kim on your first place win.
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April 15, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
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April 15, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Congrats on your win with this lively, appealing piece, Kim! Janice
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April 15, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Thanks, Janice!
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April 15, 2018 at 12:02 AM
It is a beautifulwell-thought out use of some of our best words Kim. Nice.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Thanks so much, Caren! <3
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April 14, 2018 at 7:01 PM
A beautiful write, Kim. Another masterpiece by the Master (or is it Mistress) of Verse. Thank you for the kind comments re Joyce Johnson - the grand old lady of Soup - Bob
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Thanks, Bob! How about Poetess...lol! It was my great honor to honor Joyce! <3
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