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Darkness Grows In the Garden of Pleasantries

DARKNESS GROWS IN THE GARDEN OF PLEASANTRIES Meandering through the garden of pleasantries, did you sense, the breathless pant of trees, or hear, the violin seduction, of Cupid’s sentries, or pierce the eyes, the blossom spread of luxuries? Do tell of sandals, chains and locks lost in shrubberies! O turtle doves, between your teeth, insolent mulberries. Too soon succumbed to satin skin, fracas of discoveries. The fruited-fountain of chocolate but noncommittal fudgeries.* The shrieking tomb of sirens — seagulls sic the maggoty melodies. The butterfly tresses of yesteryear sans curmudgeon cure of drudgeries. You thought to toss away her sensuous beauty, with exorbitant lies. No hope in her sea soaked eyes, salt preservative of glass flies. 4/14/2018
*fudgeries - fakes (made up word)

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Date: 4/18/2018 12:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful monorhyme. Enjoyed this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, Susan!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Date: 4/16/2018 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your first place win. A great monorhyme.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Date: 4/15/2018 10:05:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 4/15/2018 5:37:00 PM
Wonderful Monorhyme, Kim! Congrats on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations Kim, fudgeries, I like it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thanks, Tom! Just had to keep it! :)
Date: 4/15/2018 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Kim on your first place win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 4/15/2018 3:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lively, appealing piece, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Date: 4/15/2018 12:02:00 AM
It is a beautifulwell-thought out use of some of our best words Kim. Nice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2018 6:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren! <3
Date: 4/14/2018 7:01:00 PM
A beautiful write, Kim. Another masterpiece by the Master (or is it Mistress) of Verse. Thank you for the kind comments re Joyce Johnson - the grand old lady of Soup - Bob
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thanks, Bob! How about Poetess...lol! It was my great honor to honor Joyce! <3

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