Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

Darkness At Noon

The sable noon’s hues part the glow
When your form coils into a shadow
Impaired by whiffs in a forest 
As twisted leaf gnarls on its breasts

Layered, bleak gaze avoid our plight
Beneath old trees, I find no delight
From summer’s heat reeking of woes;
Lamenting vows that decompose.

Branches thirst for a glistened sun 
Mirroring frail ardor, undone 
While the ravage of time’s dismay
Ensnares lost destiny, to slay!


Dr. Ram Mehta's Darknes At Noon
by nette onclaud<

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Sam Raj May 16, 2014 at 11:18 AM Dear Nette, A excellent write, a winner all the way. Enjoyed the read immensely. A wonderful experience. Congrats on the win. Thanks for the wonderful experience I had. SAM :-)

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2014 at 8:25 PM GREAT job in the contest, Nette. BIG congratulations to you.

Lori Lucas Mcclure May 15, 2014 at 1:27 PM Congratulations on your win! Lori

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 15, 2014 at 11:46 AM Beautiful words n a wonderful write Nette ! N u r a winner of great poetry in a great contest ! Congrats !

Dr.Ram Mehta May 15, 2014 at 10:06 AM Thanks for your support and congrats on a win in my poem, nette

Aiyah Torres May 15, 2014 at 9:34 AM awesome poem... Congratulations ,nette!! ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen May 15, 2014 at 8:23 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem, sweet Nette ! - Well deserved! - (I have not participated in the contest for a while - like writing whatever comes to my mind.) - Have a nice day. - Be proud of your write :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton May 8, 2014 at 3:54 PM awesome as always from an excellent writer as yourself. Always good to read you. Cindy aka Lucinda

Keith O.J. Hunt May 7, 2014 at 1:45 PM A very good portrayal of darkness at noon nette!

Brooke Dylan May 6, 2014 at 11:50 PM BEAUTIFUL WORDS... imagery is wonderful.. I can feel every word...This poem evokes quite an emotion in me. A time when I too could smell the lonely trees.... Brooke

Cherl Dunn May 6, 2014 at 8:39 PM Beauty put to words motion, love this one good luck in the contest girl you have a great chance with this wonderful entry. cheri

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2014 at 6:11 PM a very good entry for that contest, Nette. YOu captured the mood of the theme perfectly. (food quiz results up!)

Jake Ponce May 6, 2014 at 5:41 PM Nette, recently I observed that you've been embodying the Earth Mother vibe. I might be wrong but it works really well - Earthy, Lush, Scenic and Artistically Explicit.

Brooke Dylan May 6, 2014 at 3:28 PM Bravo.. excellent writing ....this must be for a contest.. good luck and I would think you will win... wonderful writing.. Brooke

Aiyah Torres May 6, 2014 at 3:25 PM sadness barely felt through our heart...but you covered the pain w/ the beauty in your hand.. :O) this is awe to the highest level...!!! ^_^ xoxo

Banjo Casto May 6, 2014 at 2:53 PM Nostalgia, heartache it's all expressed so well in these profound and sullen lines.Had fun in your contest; many thanks, Nette

Bl Devnath May 6, 2014 at 2:15 PM Realty is nicely penned, simply I do say what I have felt here. "Branches thirst for a glistened sun".... time to time effect. Beautifully done and genius poem. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend, Loved always, bl

Jajosh Ongado May 6, 2014 at 2:13 PM What a flowing verse, calling on noon, never relenting, knowing it cannot alter time, only offer short solace.I adore this, Nette. I defer to your talent!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 6, 2014 at 12:17 PM - I'm back from vacation, Nette... - "DARKNESS AT NOON" is a beautiful poem, but so sad ..... - I wish you good luck in the contest - a worthy winner poem! - <3 U - oxox // Anne-Lise :)