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Darkness and Confusion Edited Version

I thought I’d found love, But before me it’s a deep pit Hollow and dark. I thought the sun would shine brightly, And the torrential rains stop pelting my embattled soul, But my days have become grey clouds. I’m grabbed by the stern hands of darkness, I’m freezing and blind in the dark And all I do is pray For light to bring me another day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/25/2011 9:42:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Tanya. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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Tanya Celliers
Date: 8/25/2011 11:01:00 AM
Thanks carol writing is my pasion and I carry my pen everywhere!

Book: Shattered Sighs