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Darkness

Hidden shadows

Keeping all their secrets

Out of reach from my prying eyes

If only for a moment I could see

Revealing mysteries that hide

I might learn of myself

Alone in the

Darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/29/2020 6:49:00 AM
Beautifully scribed. I Loved how you wrote this. Thank you JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/27/2020 11:35:00 AM
"I might learn of myself Alone in the darkness" The title it's self caught my attention because it's my area of ideas but the finish line is another flag that few will understand. Loving it. Thanks for your mind. Poems @Imirishyoart.blogspot.com visit.
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Date: 10/29/2018 5:59:00 AM
Ohh wow, i like that.
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Date: 9/20/2018 6:57:00 PM
Hello White Wolf, anyone in the dark will learn.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/12/2018 7:28:00 AM
So great! Love the accompaniment of the Wolf.
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Date: 8/31/2018 4:43:00 AM
Quite profound, definitely food for thought and a feeling that's hard to shake, in short - very well done. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 8/30/2018 2:42:00 AM
Fits your style, WW, nicely penned:)
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Date: 8/27/2018 10:27:00 PM
Felt the dark dense in deep sense. I admire.
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Date: 8/27/2018 10:17:00 AM
If only... Dark and deep Rictameter...
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Date: 8/25/2018 11:41:00 AM
WW, a great example for your contest, and a really great write too, the darkness holds a lot of secrets and sorrows hidden ~
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Date: 8/25/2018 7:25:00 AM
Haunting and self searching all at once. Great!
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Date: 8/24/2018 8:10:00 PM
A deep and lonely poem White Wolf of longing to find light in dark emotional shadows.. a piece that causes me to linger with your words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/24/2018 5:37:00 PM
A wonderful goosebump-raising example - hard to follow! But we shall do our best ;-)
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White Wolf
Date: 8/24/2018 5:51:00 PM
Have fun /|\
Date: 8/24/2018 5:07:00 PM
I love your example of the form! A form we need to see more of at Soup!
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Date: 8/24/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea /|\
Date: 8/24/2018 3:54:00 PM
Nice one..beautifully written...
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Date: 8/24/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thanks /|\
Date: 8/24/2018 1:15:00 PM
There's more than meets the eye... outstanding
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Date: 8/24/2018 2:34:00 PM
Cheers, matey /|\
Date: 8/24/2018 5:50:00 AM
This is just perfect. Very introspective. Definitely one to ponder for a while.
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Date: 8/24/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thank you /|\
Date: 8/24/2018 12:43:00 AM
I feel like I am gazing in the mirror, nice poem, love the form.
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Date: 8/24/2018 1:09:00 AM
Cheers /|\
Date: 8/23/2018 9:50:00 PM
A poem like a stone to turn over and over as it warms in your hand. I like it. xomo
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Date: 8/24/2018 1:08:00 AM
Thank you /|\