Darkness

A rictameter ...Rick? lol How have you been? :)

Beautifully scribed. I Loved how you wrote this. Thank you JC Hawkens

"I might learn of myself Alone in the darkness" The title it's self caught my attention because it's my area of ideas but the finish line is another flag that few will understand. Loving it. Thanks for your mind. Poems @Imirishyoart.blogspot.com visit.

Ohh wow, i like that.

Hello White Wolf, anyone in the dark will learn.Have a nice evening my friend.

So great! Love the accompaniment of the Wolf.

Quite profound, definitely food for thought and a feeling that's hard to shake, in short - very well done. All the best ... CayCay

Fits your style, WW, nicely penned:)

Felt the dark dense in deep sense. I admire.

If only... Dark and deep Rictameter...

WW, a great example for your contest, and a really great write too, the darkness holds a lot of secrets and sorrows hidden ~

Haunting and self searching all at once. Great!

A deep and lonely poem White Wolf of longing to find light in dark emotional shadows.. a piece that causes me to linger with your words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

I love your example of the form! A form we need to see more of at Soup!

Nice one..beautifully written...

There's more than meets the eye... outstanding

This is just perfect. Very introspective. Definitely one to ponder for a while.

I feel like I am gazing in the mirror, nice poem, love the form.

A poem like a stone to turn over and over as it warms in your hand. I like it. xomo