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Darker Days

I’ve awoken in despair I’m lost, I’m running away My path is getting fainter I have never seen a darker day It’s suffocating me inside I’m trapped in my anger The happiness in me has vanished And my hatred is getting stronger Only yesterday I remember I had a smile across my face Now look at me in the shadows Lurking from place to place No goal! No Future! I’ll be trapped here for eternity Groaning, moaning with pain In this life I call reality No doubt I am going to lose control Of what I call my path, my lonely road As painful as a burden can be This just drives me to explode Crazy is as clear is it can be The more I lose my mind The more I can’t agree With what I am about to find A total fiery and chaotic world In which I will live alone Flesh burning, torture of every kind This is what I will call home Now I sleep with a frown on my face Yet in another world I scream For the pain is unbearable Just please take me out of this dream!! Eliel202

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/23/2010 6:13:00 AM
Excellent.The poem lets the reader delve into your thoughts with ease. Shine on, Aseem
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:00:00 PM
Scary, yet you have controll of your dreams, spet into the dream and change it! Light & Love
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:43:00 AM
Brilliant write! I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:36:00 AM
Wow great poem.I felt as if i was there and was being devoured by your powerful words.Best poem so far.great write.Love,Jamecia
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