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Darkening clouds

quick race to the clothesline



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Paul Callus

June 4, 2018 at 4:25 PM

A striking image, Line. Hope the hard work did not go to waste! That trickle in the creek seems to be telling us that rain would be welcomed! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 8:21 PM

Absolutely, Paul. Thank you for your wonderful visit and comment.

Dale Gregory Cozart

June 4, 2018 at 3:58 PM

I've heard of which you speak. But hear in So Cal dark clouds mean nothing. They're usually gone by noon. But like Michelle I love the smell of line-dried sheets.

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 8:22 PM

Thank you, my poetic friend.

Michelle Faulkner

June 4, 2018 at 2:16 PM

I love the smell of clothes off the clothesline - great image of approaching rain-

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 8:22 PM

Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated.

Winged Warrior

June 4, 2018 at 9:56 AM

That's why we have dryers lol...but I love your wet haiku...plus I like dark clouds lol...love and light...^WW^

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 10:40 AM

The joys of country living. Miss those days.

Harry Horsman

June 4, 2018 at 7:25 AM

Oh the perfect Haiku, so soon the creek will fill..awesome poetry, Line.

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 10:39 AM

Thank you so much, Harry, for your lovely visit and comment. Most appreciated.

Elaine George

June 4, 2018 at 6:18 AM

A great Haiku, I did just that...yesterday. Elaine

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 10:40 AM

Lovely. Thanks for your visit and comment, Elaine.

Susan Ashley

June 3, 2018 at 10:08 PM

A sense of urgency is felt in your haiku, Line, of getting the laundry in just before the storm. A very visual and tactile poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2018 at 10:40 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.