Dark Woods Bq

I know better then
to be here.  I've
been told.
Things happen here.
Bad things.
Yet I am drawn.  No.
 More like willed.
I have not the power
to resist this place

I smell the decay. 
The rotting stench
Windfall trees
laying as if in wait
My tread  but a
whimper in this wood
Why am I here?  What
do I seek?

The darkness
thickens as I move
forward
Unsteady now, steps
made with
trepidation
I sense movement.  I
am not alone
Something sinister
awaits me

Whispers. Jumbled
sounds. Hollow
Seem to have moved
closer
Dare not look behind
The grip of fear
engulfs my body

A light.  Did I see
a light?
There.  So bright. 
Blinding
On my neck,  the
stale breath of
death
I cannot breath.  My
terror is too great

It is too late.  I
did not listen
I have found the
alter of the damned
I know better then
to be here
Things happen here.
 Bad things

11/20/2011


I once took a trip
up some of the
bayous in Louisiana.
 It was getting dark
on our return and
every once in a
while, you would see
a light in the
trees, in the middle
of nowhere.  That
was the inspiration.
 The rest I made up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/23/2011 5:04:00 PM
It is fun to make things up like this. I remember lights ghostly in a cemetery in alabama. That would make a good poem too! Congrats . I see you won the contest with your dark write!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/23/2011 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Andrea and yes, that would be fodder for an edgy poem.
Date: 11/23/2011 4:54:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this dark poem...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/23/2011 9:48:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte
Date: 11/23/2011 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Dark Woods" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/23/2011 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 11/22/2011 4:36:00 AM
A truthful twist...love the shorter lines for your dark write..it has a strong feel of suspense. Good win! Happy Thanksgiving, Bob Q.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/22/2011 8:33:00 AM
Thanks and to you also Gwendolen
Date: 11/22/2011 1:31:00 AM
Hi a worthy win ,Congratulations x
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/22/2011 8:34:00 AM
Appreciate it Mandy
Date: 11/21/2011 11:42:00 PM
sounded like a bad bad place to be, imagination wont let ya free, great poem .....bad things ...great ending hey...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/22/2011 8:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot Don
Date: 11/21/2011 10:26:00 PM
BOB, this was a great walk through the woods.. enjoyed your imagination, Congratulations, in my Dark Woods, contest.. ;-) take care and have a good night,..p.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/22/2011 8:35:00 AM
Thanks P.D. It was a fun write
Date: 11/21/2011 12:02:00 PM
This is nice and well written. Best wishes in the contest.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 11/21/2011 9:07:00 AM
Very scary, Bob! Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 9:38:00 AM
Thanks very much Kim
Date: 11/21/2011 12:59:00 AM
Eerie and chilling, the sinister things that lie in wait. You bring a feeling of helplessness to this story, Willed, compelled to move deeper and deeper in... certainly fits the contest requirements... well written Bob, good luck...Margaret
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments Margaret
Date: 11/20/2011 11:39:00 PM
Thank you Bob,,, for the contest support... have a great night,.. LInda
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 8:22:00 AM
You bet. Thanks Linda
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